作业帮请看看我这篇英语写作如何?帮忙修改润色下!
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请看看我这篇英语写作如何?帮忙修改润色下!
My Procrastination
Frankly,I am not a lazy boy.However,the habit of
procrastination has put me in troubles so many times.
Not until the deadline is arrived do i begin to adress
the stuff 匆匆忙忙地.I have tried to change the habit
but I faild.My dirty clothes are piled up as a small
hill by me and are washed clean until i have no clean
clothes to wear.More worsely,the tasks my teacher
assigned to me are always prelonged because of my
procrastination that spoils me.I don't wanna continue
the situation,and the decision （决心） must be made
and the plan to solve my problem must be sticked for
long times
My Procrastination
Frankly,I am not a lazy boy.However,the habit of
procrastination has put me in troubles so many times.
Not until the deadline is arrived do i begin to adress
the stuff 匆匆忙忙地.I have tried to change the habit
but I faild.My dirty clothes are piled up as a small
hill by me and are washed clean until i have no clean
clothes to wear.More worsely,the tasks my teacher
assigned to me are always prelonged because of my
procrastination that spoils me.I don't wanna continue
the situation,and the decision （决心） must be made
and the plan to solve my problem must be sticked for
long times
总得来说还不错.
句型是你自己的,我就不说了.再说改起来太麻烦
我就说几个单词好了,你有很多单词用的都不错.我就说几个,也仅供楼主参考.
1.More worsely 我建议换成 What`s more,或者,What`s make things worse
2.decision你还表了个决心的那个 我觉得换成determination 更好
你说呢?
如果觉得不好,你就保留你的.嘿嘿
句型是你自己的,我就不说了.再说改起来太麻烦
我就说几个单词好了,你有很多单词用的都不错.我就说几个,也仅供楼主参考.
1.More worsely 我建议换成 What`s more,或者,What`s make things worse
2.decision你还表了个决心的那个 我觉得换成determination 更好
你说呢?
如果觉得不好,你就保留你的.嘿嘿
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