简单的英语演讲稿，请纠错 hello,everybody.today l will talk about how to

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简单的英语演讲稿，请纠错 hello,everybody.today l will talk about how to make you feel happy by yourself. in this times,everybody has streess,how can we keep happy?At first,we must know what makes us feel unhappy ornervous. Are your classmates or parents?you can try to make friends with them and talk with them.secondly,when something worries you,you cant put your depression in your heart.you should tell your parents and friends,you will behappier.then you will be sunshine.now,can you make you happy by yourself?请帮我找出语法，结构上的错误越多越好

第二句，today I am talking about how to make yourself happy 再答： In this time最好换成currently
再答： stresses改成stress
再问：在这个时代，确定改currently吗
再答： currently 意思是现如今
再答： In the temporary society是这个时代，这个社会的意思
再答：第四句你用了what，但第五句却列举了人，不合适
再答： Secondly 一句，建议用we should... instead of...的句式，会更加连贯
再问：原本的句式应该也不错吧，你说的那种还没学。
再答：等下哦
再问：我会采纳你的，但先帮我看完哦

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