作业帮请老师们帮我批改英语作文
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请老师们帮我批改英语作文
there is a clothing wholesale market next to my work unit.
it may be one of China's biggest low-end clothing wholesale market,
and may be one of areas where is the most traffic chaos in Guangzhou.
there are hundreds of thousands of businessmen from all over the country into this small place every day.
lack of management cause here getting dirty,crowded and disorder ,also full of fire hazard.
the victims who suffer most are the nearby residents and those of us office worker,
every day we have to go to work an hour earlier in order to avoid being late.
someone says helplessly,perhaps only a casualties serious fire can cause enough attention of government.
there is a clothing wholesale market next to my work unit.
it may be one of China's biggest low-end clothing wholesale market,
and may be one of areas where is the most traffic chaos in Guangzhou.
there are hundreds of thousands of businessmen from all over the country into this small place every day.
lack of management cause here getting dirty,crowded and disorder ,also full of fire hazard.
the victims who suffer most are the nearby residents and those of us office worker,
every day we have to go to work an hour earlier in order to avoid being late.
someone says helplessly,perhaps only a casualties serious fire can cause enough attention of government.
大致批改如下,仅供参考
There is a clothing wholesale market next to my work unit.
It may be one of the China's biggest low-end clothing wholesale markets, and may be one of the areas which are the most traffic chaos in Guangzhou. There are hundreds of thousands of businessmen from all over the country coming into this small place every day. Lack of management causes here to get dirty, crowded and disorder , also full of fire hazard. The victims who suffer most are the nearby residents and those of us who are office workers. Every day we have to go to work an hour earlier in order to avoid being late. Someone says helplessly, perhaps only casualties from a serious fire can cause enough attention of the government.
表达是清楚的.
There is a clothing wholesale market next to my work unit.
It may be one of the China's biggest low-end clothing wholesale markets, and may be one of the areas which are the most traffic chaos in Guangzhou. There are hundreds of thousands of businessmen from all over the country coming into this small place every day. Lack of management causes here to get dirty, crowded and disorder , also full of fire hazard. The victims who suffer most are the nearby residents and those of us who are office workers. Every day we have to go to work an hour earlier in order to avoid being late. Someone says helplessly, perhaps only casualties from a serious fire can cause enough attention of the government.
表达是清楚的.