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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。The 11.11 Shopping Festival, as

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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。The 11.11 Shopping Festival, as the event i
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
The 11.11 Shopping Festival, as the event is now called, occurs on the day known in China as Single’s Day, a holiday on which young people cry about or celebrate being single. Five years ago the shopping website Alibaba began promoting the day as a shopping festival, and it has now turned to be the country’s busiest day for online sellers, millions of shopping lovers and thousands of delivery companies.
Every Nov. 11, millions of Chinese shoppers go to the e-commerce websites operated by Alibaba Group Holding Ltd., which is the world’s largest e-commerce platform: The total value of goods sold last year by Taobao and Tmall, the company’s two main shopping sites, topped one trillion yuan ($160 billion), larger than last year’s totals for Amazon.com and eBay combined.
But not everyone likes shopping on that day. Chen Jing, a lawyer in Beijing, says, “Nobody knows what anything is really worth. Online shoppers are guided by shallow tips (“this is cheaper than that”) and vague emotions (“it just feels like a good deal”) rather than knowledge and deliberate thinking.” Critics like Chen complain that people believe the most popular day of the year to shop is the best day of the year to buy anything. But the fact is that the prices of many items on that day are not the lowest of the year and usually shoppers buy lots of things they don’t need.
【写作内容】
1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2. 以约120个词就“网络购物”的话题谈谈你的想法,内容包括:
(1)你对文中所描述的网赂购物现象的看法;
(2)描述你或他人网络购物的经历;
(3)说明网络购物时应注意的问题。
【写作要求】
1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。


The article describes how the Chinese festival of Single’s Day has become a most profitable online shopping holiday. It also points out the risk of buying unnecessary things at high prices.
I thinkonline shopping has made the lives of many people much easier and more enriched, which partly explains the Nov. 11 e-shopping phenomenon.
Personally I have been able to buy many things online that I could not find in our local stores, such as an old Japanese comic I bought from a comic book website recently. Shopping online has also allowed me to save a lot of money. This year, for example, I purchased a pair of glasses from an American website. These glasses cost 1500 yuan at the department store near my home. But I paid only 100 dollars online, less than half the department store price!!!
Of course we must be careful when shopping online. We should only use websites that have a good reputation for quality and honesty otherwise our personal information may be stolen and the goods we buy may be of poor quality.

试题分析:本文属于读写任务写作,动笔前,一定要认真阅读原文,并理解内容。认真看清题目要求,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己不会的单词、词组和句型,同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型,使自己的文章更有文采。 
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如point out,such as,allow sb. to do,for example , have a good reputation for,be of poor quality.;还运用句型which引导的定语从句。并注意了句子的衔接如:and,but,otherwise 等等。