作业帮小学生英语自我介绍,帮忙看一下有没有问题,或可以改成更好的.谢谢.
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小学生英语自我介绍,帮忙看一下有没有问题,或可以改成更好的.谢谢.
Hello, my name is xx. I am 12 years old. My birthday is November 18th. I will graduate from xxx Primary School. My father is an engineer and my mother is an accountant. They are all work hard.
English is my favorite subject, because English teacher is kind and humorous.
My hobbies are singing, reading, traveling and playing violin.
In my spare time, I like playing computer. Sometimes I surf online to look for some useful information. It is really convenient. And also I like reading books at home. My favorite kind of books is novels because they are very interesting.
After school, I often play with my classmates. We often play the shuttlecock kicking or talk with each other. My school life is really fun!
I hope I can make new friends in middle school.
Hello, my name is xx. I am 12 years old. My birthday is November 18th. I will graduate from xxx Primary School. My father is an engineer and my mother is an accountant. They are all work hard.
English is my favorite subject, because English teacher is kind and humorous.
My hobbies are singing, reading, traveling and playing violin.
In my spare time, I like playing computer. Sometimes I surf online to look for some useful information. It is really convenient. And also I like reading books at home. My favorite kind of books is novels because they are very interesting.
After school, I often play with my classmates. We often play the shuttlecock kicking or talk with each other. My school life is really fun!
I hope I can make new friends in middle school.
如果你是小学生,那真是得过目想看了!不过,我还是帮你过了一下,纠正了几个错误并使全文变得更地道些.放心用吧.并请注意每一个改动的地方,都是有其道理的.I feel glad that you have been enjoying your primary school life.
Hello, my name is xx. I am 12 years old. My birthday is November 18th. I will graduate from xxx Primary School soon. My father is an engineer and my mother, an accountant. [这种省略法更上乘] Both of them work very hard.
English is my favorite subject as my English teacher is kind and humorous.
My hobbies are singing, reading, traveling and playing the violin.
In my spare time, I like playing computer. Sometimes I surf online to look for some useful information. It is really convenient. I like reading books at home as well. My favorite kind of books are novels because they are very interesting.
After school, I often play with my classmates. We often do shuttlecock kicking or talk with one another. My school life is really fun!
I hope I can make new friends in middle school.
Hello, my name is xx. I am 12 years old. My birthday is November 18th. I will graduate from xxx Primary School soon. My father is an engineer and my mother, an accountant. [这种省略法更上乘] Both of them work very hard.
English is my favorite subject as my English teacher is kind and humorous.
My hobbies are singing, reading, traveling and playing the violin.
In my spare time, I like playing computer. Sometimes I surf online to look for some useful information. It is really convenient. I like reading books at home as well. My favorite kind of books are novels because they are very interesting.
After school, I often play with my classmates. We often do shuttlecock kicking or talk with one another. My school life is really fun!
I hope I can make new friends in middle school.
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