作业帮高中的英语作文，请英语老师帮忙看一下哪有语法错误或者有错误的地方告诉我一下，如何修改的更好谢谢老师
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高中的英语作文，请英语老师帮忙看一下哪有语法错误或者有错误的地方告诉我一下，如何修改的更好谢谢老师
题目：Living on or off Campus
要求：1.住校的好处
2.住在家里的好处。
3.我的观点。
Living on or off Campus
Nowadays,more and more students live live in home because it has a lot of advantages.First , living in home is more comfortable than living on compus.Second, They can live with their parent and eat more delicious food.Finally,If they have problem in study , they can search it with computer conveniently.
On the contrary,there are some people in favor of living on campus. At the same time,they say living on campus is a good chance which communicate with each other to cultiveate our teamwork. Besides,they have more time to study. Last but not the least,it is a good time to cultivate our self-support.
As far as i am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. I think living on school not only give us a chance to make friends but also learn more things which never learn from home. Therefore I would like to living on campus.
老师，请给我讲的详细点，我的语法很次，全是凭感觉写的，相信一定有很多语法错误。还有自己的词汇量太差，总会用到重复的句型和词，老师帮我修改一下，谢谢。
有没有老师可以帮帮我啊？？ 把我的文章复制下来，然后告诉我那个地方错了。 语法上没有错误码？
题目：Living on or off Campus
要求：1.住校的好处
2.住在家里的好处。
3.我的观点。
Living on or off Campus
Nowadays,more and more students live live in home because it has a lot of advantages.First , living in home is more comfortable than living on compus.Second, They can live with their parent and eat more delicious food.Finally,If they have problem in study , they can search it with computer conveniently.
On the contrary,there are some people in favor of living on campus. At the same time,they say living on campus is a good chance which communicate with each other to cultiveate our teamwork. Besides,they have more time to study. Last but not the least,it is a good time to cultivate our self-support.
As far as i am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. I think living on school not only give us a chance to make friends but also learn more things which never learn from home. Therefore I would like to living on campus.
老师，请给我讲的详细点，我的语法很次，全是凭感觉写的，相信一定有很多语法错误。还有自己的词汇量太差，总会用到重复的句型和词，老师帮我修改一下，谢谢。
有没有老师可以帮帮我啊？？ 把我的文章复制下来，然后告诉我那个地方错了。 语法上没有错误码？
第1段
more and more students are home from work everyday because ...
First 改成 Firstly或 At first First 不能单独用
Second 改成 Secondly
parent +S
problem 问题，习题（数字，事实方面） 应该+S
search it with computer...改成 search for the answers with the help of computer...
第2段
people 改成 students
...they think that it is a good chance for them to communicate with each other and cultivate their teamwork 你那句人称好像乱了
最后那句 Our 改成 their
最后一段
as far as i concerned （好像是)
living on school改成 campus
which can never be learnt at home 应被动
个人观点 请参考 呵呵
more and more students are home from work everyday because ...
First 改成 Firstly或 At first First 不能单独用
Second 改成 Secondly
parent +S
problem 问题，习题（数字，事实方面） 应该+S
search it with computer...改成 search for the answers with the help of computer...
第2段
people 改成 students
...they think that it is a good chance for them to communicate with each other and cultivate their teamwork 你那句人称好像乱了
最后那句 Our 改成 their
最后一段
as far as i concerned （好像是)
living on school改成 campus
which can never be learnt at home 应被动
个人观点 请参考 呵呵
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