作业帮帮帮忙修改一下我的英文自我介绍,急~~~~~又追加!
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帮帮忙修改一下我的英文自我介绍,急~~~~~又追加!
Good afternoon .
Thank everyone for giving me this opportunity.I am of great hornor to stand here and introduce myself to you .I am enough confident that I can make a good performance today.First of all,I will present you about my personal information.My name is 燕飞 who comes from 西安 in 陕西 province.But 西安 just is my residence,my real birthplace is 合阳 county.To be believe that you have never heard of this place.After all,it's only a small county.About my hobby, that's very widely.For example, playing chess, tourism, playing video games and watching movies.To be honest,I would have joined our university's community approximately the six.I am a cheerful person,not only positive but optimistic,I think so.The second,Talking about my family now.In fact,I grew up in a big family.The reason that it is a big family,not because there are many family members in it,but because of many complex relationship.Many relatives and my family have got close, very close,so they are like my family the same for me.Sometimes I prefer to stay alone, reading, listening to music, but I am not lonely,I like to chat with my friends, almost talk everything.This is why I am so try to find my own the other half.Whether academic or love,as long as the unremitting efforts.I believe that I can success.
Good afternoon .
Thank everyone for giving me this opportunity.I am of great hornor to stand here and introduce myself to you .I am enough confident that I can make a good performance today.First of all,I will present you about my personal information.My name is 燕飞 who comes from 西安 in 陕西 province.But 西安 just is my residence,my real birthplace is 合阳 county.To be believe that you have never heard of this place.After all,it's only a small county.About my hobby, that's very widely.For example, playing chess, tourism, playing video games and watching movies.To be honest,I would have joined our university's community approximately the six.I am a cheerful person,not only positive but optimistic,I think so.The second,Talking about my family now.In fact,I grew up in a big family.The reason that it is a big family,not because there are many family members in it,but because of many complex relationship.Many relatives and my family have got close, very close,so they are like my family the same for me.Sometimes I prefer to stay alone, reading, listening to music, but I am not lonely,I like to chat with my friends, almost talk everything.This is why I am so try to find my own the other half.Whether academic or love,as long as the unremitting efforts.I believe that I can success.
Good afternoon,
Thank you everyone for giving me this opportunity.It is a great honor to stand here and introduce myself to you .I am confident that I can put on a good performance today.First of all,I would like to give you my personal information.My name is 燕飞 and I come from 西安 in 陕西 province.But 西安 just is my residence place,my real birthplace is 合阳 county.I believe that you have never heard of this place before.After all ,it's only a small county.I have a wide range of hobbies.For example,playing chess,tourism,playing video games and watching movies.To be honest,I would have joined our university's community approximately the sixth .I am a cheerful person,positive and optimistic.Secondly,I would like to talk about my family now.In fact,I grew up in a big family.It is a big family,not because there are many family members in it,but because of many complex relationships.Many relatives and my family are so close that they just like my family member.Sometimes I prefer to stay alone,reading,listening to music,but I am not lonely,I like to chat with my friends,almost about everything.This is why I try so hard to find my own other half.No matter it is academic or love,as long as I give the unremitting efforts,I believe that I can succeed.
Thank you everyone for giving me this opportunity.It is a great honor to stand here and introduce myself to you .I am confident that I can put on a good performance today.First of all,I would like to give you my personal information.My name is 燕飞 and I come from 西安 in 陕西 province.But 西安 just is my residence place,my real birthplace is 合阳 county.I believe that you have never heard of this place before.After all ,it's only a small county.I have a wide range of hobbies.For example,playing chess,tourism,playing video games and watching movies.To be honest,I would have joined our university's community approximately the sixth .I am a cheerful person,positive and optimistic.Secondly,I would like to talk about my family now.In fact,I grew up in a big family.It is a big family,not because there are many family members in it,but because of many complex relationships.Many relatives and my family are so close that they just like my family member.Sometimes I prefer to stay alone,reading,listening to music,but I am not lonely,I like to chat with my friends,almost about everything.This is why I try so hard to find my own other half.No matter it is academic or love,as long as I give the unremitting efforts,I believe that I can succeed.