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求大神看下这英文自我介绍有什么语法错误,和能进行怎样的优化...

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求大神看下这英文自我介绍有什么语法错误,和能进行怎样的优化...
我叫XXX,你可以叫我X,我性格比较开朗,人儿比较容易相处,My name is XXX and you can call me X,I am cheerful and easy to get along with ,
我比较喜欢打羽毛球、打dota、书法、唱歌等,我毕业于XX大学I love playing badminton 、playing dota、handwriting、singing and so on ,I've graduated from XX universty ,
我的大学专业是软件工程,我已经有一年的关于asp.net 的软件开发经验了my university major is software engineering ,and I have one year experience of working about asp.net software develop.
我熟悉c#、sql、 js、 css、 html、 ajax、webserviceand I’m good at c# 、sql、css、js、html、ajax、webservice,
能独立完成上级分配任务,有较强的团队意识和较强的再学习能力and I am able to complete tasks assigned by superior ,and I have a strong sense of team and strong learning ability.
好不容易混过四级,还要作英文自我介绍,我容易么我(i easy what me- -)
My name is ... and you can call me ... I'm cheerful and outgoing, thus easy to get along with.
My hobby is playing badminton, playing dotoa, handwriting and singing. I graduated from ** University and I majored in software engineering. Young as I am, I have had more than a year of experience in developing the software of asp.net , and I'm skilled at c# , sql, css, js, html, ajax, webservice.
I'm able to complete the assigned tasks individually, and above all, I have a good sense of teamwork and a strong desire to study further.
Thank you!