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帮忙批改下一篇英语作文,Ⅲ
说明：以Daniel Trade 公司市场部经理李华的身份于6月15日给John Holland 先生写一封催款信,信中应当包括以下内容：
1.问及Holland 先生近况；
2.要求Holland 先生尽快支付10,000元贷款,该笔款项已经过期10天；
3.随信寄上公司最新的夏季产品目录,希望Holland 先生尽早寄来新的订单,可享受公司的优惠价格.
注意：务必按业务信函的格式书写.
Words for reference：
优惠价格：special offers 过期：overdue
John Holland,
Every is going well?There is a thing need you to do it hurry.Please pay 10,000 as soon as possible .This program is overdue ten days.With the letter is a up to date summer product list.I hope Mr Holland to send a new order form.If you do like that,you can share special offers.That all.I hope you can continue to co-operation.Thank you!
Yours friendly
Daniel Trade
说明：以Daniel Trade 公司市场部经理李华的身份于6月15日给John Holland 先生写一封催款信,信中应当包括以下内容：
1.问及Holland 先生近况；
2.要求Holland 先生尽快支付10,000元贷款,该笔款项已经过期10天；
3.随信寄上公司最新的夏季产品目录,希望Holland 先生尽早寄来新的订单,可享受公司的优惠价格.
注意：务必按业务信函的格式书写.
Words for reference：
优惠价格：special offers 过期：overdue
John Holland,
Every is going well?There is a thing need you to do it hurry.Please pay 10,000 as soon as possible .This program is overdue ten days.With the letter is a up to date summer product list.I hope Mr Holland to send a new order form.If you do like that,you can share special offers.That all.I hope you can continue to co-operation.Thank you!
Yours friendly
Daniel Trade
错误太多.
先给分,表示一下尊重,可以考虑给你批.
先给分,表示一下尊重,可以考虑给你批.