作业帮麻烦帮我看一下语法错误
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麻烦帮我看一下语法错误
1.Secondly, the Postgraduate Public English curriculum on the type of class is similar to undergraduate college English, the curriculum design is single and backward, many school generally only open the intensive reading and listening, rarely also have other courses such as writing.
2.The other teachers consider that postgraduate is high level talents, their independent learning ability is stronger, there is not necessary to force students to go to class, so the postgraduates' English course should be selective.
3.Moreover, the teacher's teaching method is single, they generally use the traditional teaching method, which the teacher is centered in class, reading and translation teaching is the main line, books and the blackboard are medium.
这些都说我语法不规范,我怎么看不出来呢 麻烦帮忙看一下吧
1.Secondly, the Postgraduate Public English curriculum on the type of class is similar to undergraduate college English, the curriculum design is single and backward, many school generally only open the intensive reading and listening, rarely also have other courses such as writing.
2.The other teachers consider that postgraduate is high level talents, their independent learning ability is stronger, there is not necessary to force students to go to class, so the postgraduates' English course should be selective.
3.Moreover, the teacher's teaching method is single, they generally use the traditional teaching method, which the teacher is centered in class, reading and translation teaching is the main line, books and the blackboard are medium.
这些都说我语法不规范,我怎么看不出来呢 麻烦帮忙看一下吧
1.class 和 curriculum 是近义字,二选一以免拖沓;单调==>dull/monotonous,过时outmoded;最後一句需补字
The type of postgraduate public English curriculum is similar to the undergraduate one.This kind of curriculum design is dull and outmoded.Moreover,many schools generally only open the intensive reading and listening courses.Other courses such as writing are rare.
2.前 postgraduate is high talents 後their是明显的文法不一致错误;後面句子须补字;attend一词代go to使文体简洁;postgraduate 可作形容词,不用's;最後补上连接词理顺句子逻辑
The other teachers consider the postgraduates as high level talents whose self-learning ability is stronger.Therefore,it is not necessary to force students to attend classes.Thus,the postgraduate English course should be selective.
3.single又来了~别告诉我你单身太久了==>dull/monotonous...首句teacher's可删去搬动:都说教学方式了有必要强调"老师的"吗?...main line==>请改用major contents..下次写读後感有皇室血统或小说主线才用mainline...
Moreover,the teaching method is monotonous.The teachers generally use the traditional teaching method,which the teacher is centered,books and blackboard are medium,and reading as well as translation teachings are the major contents.
The type of postgraduate public English curriculum is similar to the undergraduate one.This kind of curriculum design is dull and outmoded.Moreover,many schools generally only open the intensive reading and listening courses.Other courses such as writing are rare.
2.前 postgraduate is high talents 後their是明显的文法不一致错误;後面句子须补字;attend一词代go to使文体简洁;postgraduate 可作形容词,不用's;最後补上连接词理顺句子逻辑
The other teachers consider the postgraduates as high level talents whose self-learning ability is stronger.Therefore,it is not necessary to force students to attend classes.Thus,the postgraduate English course should be selective.
3.single又来了~别告诉我你单身太久了==>dull/monotonous...首句teacher's可删去搬动:都说教学方式了有必要强调"老师的"吗?...main line==>请改用major contents..下次写读後感有皇室血统或小说主线才用mainline...
Moreover,the teaching method is monotonous.The teachers generally use the traditional teaching method,which the teacher is centered,books and blackboard are medium,and reading as well as translation teachings are the major contents.