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帮忙看下有语法错误么...
To whom it may concern:
With reference to your advertisement in XXX website for an English Teaching Assistant,I would like to apply for the position and enclose a copy of my CV.I believe there are a number of areas where my skills would be benefit to your school and would match the job specification.I am a senior student who master in English and will be graduate from XXX College of Economics.Have been learned Comprehensive English,College English Listening and Speaking Course,Business English Reading,English to Chinese Translation,Business English Correspondance.
I am available for interview at your convenience and look forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely,
Han meimei
建议:1,to apply for the position with a copy of my CV attached.
2,I am a senior student majoring...
3,这个必须改:will graduate.去掉be
4,have...这个句子没有主语,fragment了