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请帮我把这段英语文字的错误指出,并改得高级一点,最好要有许多亮点.我写的太流水账.

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请帮我把这段英语文字的错误指出,并改得高级一点,最好要有许多亮点.我写的太流水账.
...In fact,hard-working will keeps us busy and forget something bad.as a student,I must study hard,which can make me full of hopeness and never left regret.
There is a classmate who is mine,studying hard every day.even if in weekend,she was give uo his ret times to study,Though she hardly rest,she is still happy.Because it is excited for her to get a brilliant result.
The majoritu of students feel bored with study,as for me,the reasons why students hate study is that their lost interest in it..
In fact,hard-working will keeps【语法错误】 us busy and forget 【加to等】 something bad【表意不清】.as【大写,空格】 a student,I must study hard,【定语指代不清】which can make me full of hopeness【词汇错误】 and never left regret【用法奇怪】.
There is a classmate who is mine【用法歧义】,studying hard every day.even if in weekend,she was give uo his【到底男的女的】 ret 【拼写】times to study,Though she hardly rest【语法】,she is still happy.Because it is excited【exciting】 for her to get a brilliant result【我没懂...】.
The majoritu【这是什么= =】 of students feel bored with study,as for me,the reasons why students hate study is that their lost interest in it.
【问题太多了我给你改改吧】
In fact,being hardworking allows us to keep busy and forget the bad things in our lifes.As a student,I must study hard in order to keep me hopeful,but never regretful.
There is a classmate of mine who studies hard every day.Even in weekends,she would give up her spare time to study more.Though she hardly rests,she still looks happy,because it is exciting for her to work towards a brilliant goal.
The majority of students are bored with studying.The reason why students hate studying,from my perspective,is that they have long lost their interest in it.
在美国生活多年...改的应该没问题