作业帮英语大神进.这是我写的一篇作文,有许多错误的地方,望指出并改正!
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英语大神进.这是我写的一篇作文,有许多错误的地方,望指出并改正!
你想要几年级的水平?是就把你句子里的语法问题改了还是意思也给你稍微顺一下?
Dear Sally,
i'm so glad to hear that you are planning a trip to Beijing.
being a local people,i'd like like to tell you something about this city.
Beijing is a city with very long history.To make it simple,there were many Emperors living in the old time.(北京是城市 不是人或者动物什么的 所以不要用HAVE 要用 there be,时态上用普通过去式就行了,反正这些皇帝都死了 也不会对现在有什么延续 用不到完成式）
Besides the history,there are also a lots of intresting place to go,such as forbiden city,Yuanmingyuan imperial garden,or Great wall.Beijing is a wonderful city you can't miss if you plan to come China.And the most important thing is that you can have various delicious food here beyond your imagination.
I promise Beijing won't let you down,and can't wait to see you in Beijing!
yours,
your name
再问： to make it simple怎么翻译？
再问： 初三的水平就OK了，也顺便改顺点。千恩万谢
再答： 简单来说~
再问： ？
Dear Sally,
i'm so glad to hear that you are planning a trip to Beijing.
being a local people,i'd like like to tell you something about this city.
Beijing is a city with very long history.To make it simple,there were many Emperors living in the old time.(北京是城市 不是人或者动物什么的 所以不要用HAVE 要用 there be,时态上用普通过去式就行了,反正这些皇帝都死了 也不会对现在有什么延续 用不到完成式）
Besides the history,there are also a lots of intresting place to go,such as forbiden city,Yuanmingyuan imperial garden,or Great wall.Beijing is a wonderful city you can't miss if you plan to come China.And the most important thing is that you can have various delicious food here beyond your imagination.
I promise Beijing won't let you down,and can't wait to see you in Beijing!
yours,
your name
再问： to make it simple怎么翻译？
再问： 初三的水平就OK了，也顺便改顺点。千恩万谢
再答： 简单来说~
再问： ？