作业帮请大家帮我看一下这篇英语作文,可能有什么错误的地方
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请大家帮我看一下这篇英语作文,可能有什么错误的地方
请用英语描写你的寒假计划。我很激动。我计划：
1.我和父母一起坐飞机去澳大利亚旅行。2.在沙滩上享受阳光。3.我去游泳，和鱼儿在水中玩。4.和外国人交朋友。5.我的感受——
这是我写的作文：
my plan
I and my father and mather will go to Australia.We can see many beatry budings in Australia If weathe is good.I will enjoy sun go to sea.And i will go to swimming.There are fish play games with me.I like Australia best.I will make friends with difftant country people.I feel so happy.I hope have a good time.
请用英语描写你的寒假计划。我很激动。我计划：
1.我和父母一起坐飞机去澳大利亚旅行。2.在沙滩上享受阳光。3.我去游泳，和鱼儿在水中玩。4.和外国人交朋友。5.我的感受——
这是我写的作文：
my plan
I and my father and mather will go to Australia.We can see many beatry budings in Australia If weathe is good.I will enjoy sun go to sea.And i will go to swimming.There are fish play games with me.I like Australia best.I will make friends with difftant country people.I feel so happy.I hope have a good time.
改过的作文如下：
my plan
my parents and I will go to Australia.We can see many beautiful budings in Australia if the weather is good.I will enjoy the sun when I go to the beach.And i will go swimming.There are fish playing games with me.I like Australia best.I will make friends with people from different countries .I may feel so happy.I hope that I will have a good time.
my plan
my parents and I will go to Australia.We can see many beautiful budings in Australia if the weather is good.I will enjoy the sun when I go to the beach.And i will go swimming.There are fish playing games with me.I like Australia best.I will make friends with people from different countries .I may feel so happy.I hope that I will have a good time.