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Liar
Recently,a thought occured to me.
That is "I don't want to deceive anybody."
Yeah,I really don't want to be a liar.
I know that sometimes if I had deceived someone,I might be benefited.
But that guy may feel disappointed to me or even hate me if he/she got the truth.
I hate to be a liar.
Not only does it hurt others but myself as well.
You might not know how I felt when I had deceived someone.
I felt guilty about it.
I know that I also benefit from it but that is nonsense.
Somebody say :"A lie without a bad intention may help someone."
But how do you know that lie is really without bad intention to someone.
Maybe someday,if he/she realised that it's just a lie...how unbearable it is ...
I know,I know.
You want to say :"We can deceive him/her forever.Then he/she may be happy forever."
But I always think that loyalty should be the vital importance to you and me.
Someday if you know somebody is lying you,how do you feel?
I have forgotten the past,so I have forgotten the lies in the past already.
But in the future,I will try my best not to deceive anyone.
Liar
Recently,a thought occured to me.
That is "I don't want to deceive anybody."
Yeah,I really don't want to be a liar.
I know that sometimes if I had deceived someone,I might be benefited.
But that guy may feel disappointed to me or even hate me if he/she got the truth.
I hate to be a liar.
Not only does it hurt others but myself as well.
You might not know how I felt when I had deceived someone.
I felt guilty about it.
I know that I also benefit from it but that is nonsense.
Somebody say :"A lie without a bad intention may help someone."
But how do you know that lie is really without bad intention to someone.
Maybe someday,if he/she realised that it's just a lie...how unbearable it is ...
I know,I know.
You want to say :"We can deceive him/her forever.Then he/she may be happy forever."
But I always think that loyalty should be the vital importance to you and me.
Someday if you know somebody is lying you,how do you feel?
I have forgotten the past,so I have forgotten the lies in the past already.
But in the future,I will try my best not to deceive anyone.
No,the words and grammar are not major problems.