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帮忙看看这篇文章有没有语法错误
看看有没有用语不当或语法错误 我是初二的,所以不要改得太难哟!
Today,I tell you a true story about two beggars and me.One day,the beggars stopped me and asked me for money.The beggars are two old women with dirty hair,which smelled sourness and I must hold my my nose.They said with a poor voice:Oh,kind girl,Could you gave us some (a few) money we came from Sichuan and we have not ate anything for two days,just only two yuan for two pieces of bread.
I thought it maybe true,so I gave them two yuan.
But two weeks late,I walked on the same raod and stopped by the beggars again.They said in same poor voice:Oh,kind girl,Could you gave us some (a few) money we came from Sichuan and we have not ate anything for two days,just only two yuan for two pieces of bread.I surprised and said :Oh ,you asked money again from me
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看看有没有用语不当或语法错误 我是初二的,所以不要改得太难哟!
Today,I tell you a true story about two beggars and me.One day,the beggars stopped me and asked me for money.The beggars are two old women with dirty hair,which smelled sourness and I must hold my my nose.They said with a poor voice:Oh,kind girl,Could you gave us some (a few) money we came from Sichuan and we have not ate anything for two days,just only two yuan for two pieces of bread.
I thought it maybe true,so I gave them two yuan.
But two weeks late,I walked on the same raod and stopped by the beggars again.They said in same poor voice:Oh,kind girl,Could you gave us some (a few) money we came from Sichuan and we have not ate anything for two days,just only two yuan for two pieces of bread.I surprised and said :Oh ,you asked money again from me
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sourness改为sour
must hold my nose改为had to hold my breath
gave改为give,不可用a few
came from Sichuan 改为come from Sichuan
have not ate anything改为have not had anything to eat
just only two yuan for two pieces of bread前边加we need
maybe改为may be
late改为later
They said in same poor voice中的same前加the
Could you gave 改为Could you give
其他同上
I surprised 中间加got
you asked money again from me改为you are asking me for money again.
must hold my nose改为had to hold my breath
gave改为give,不可用a few
came from Sichuan 改为come from Sichuan
have not ate anything改为have not had anything to eat
just only two yuan for two pieces of bread前边加we need
maybe改为may be
late改为later
They said in same poor voice中的same前加the
Could you gave 改为Could you give
其他同上
I surprised 中间加got
you asked money again from me改为you are asking me for money again.