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帮我改改这篇文章 英语!
The Spinng Festival is coming,all of us are excited.We prepare delicious food,drings and buy fireworks.We wear new clothes because we need to visit some relations and they also visit us.
In the evening,we watch Spring Festival Gala Evening and set off workfires ,though it is very noisy but we thing it makes Spring Festival more interesting .Children always get a lots of money,butparents always order them to save money in thebank.This is the most sad things in the Festival!
这种文章所用的主要时态应该是什么，我是在春节前写的。
The Spinng Festival is coming,all of us are excited.We prepare delicious food,drings and buy fireworks.We wear new clothes because we need to visit some relations and they also visit us.
In the evening,we watch Spring Festival Gala Evening and set off workfires ,though it is very noisy but we thing it makes Spring Festival more interesting .Children always get a lots of money,butparents always order them to save money in thebank.This is the most sad things in the Festival!
这种文章所用的主要时态应该是什么，我是在春节前写的。
初中生吗?这种水平不错了.
语法和拼写错误的话,第一行drings改成drinks,Spring的拼写注意.倒数第三行thing改成think,去掉but.因为thought和but不能出现在同一个句子中.最后一行most sad 改成sadest.倒数第二行的order最好改成ask,order表示命令比较严肃一些.
内容能再充实的话就再充实一些,你能写得更好,对吧!有问题给我发信息.
时态的话,用一般现在时可以.但最好在The Spinng Festival is coming后面再加上一句During this time,和后面的内容时态连贯起来
语法和拼写错误的话,第一行drings改成drinks,Spring的拼写注意.倒数第三行thing改成think,去掉but.因为thought和but不能出现在同一个句子中.最后一行most sad 改成sadest.倒数第二行的order最好改成ask,order表示命令比较严肃一些.
内容能再充实的话就再充实一些,你能写得更好,对吧!有问题给我发信息.
时态的话,用一般现在时可以.但最好在The Spinng Festival is coming后面再加上一句During this time,和后面的内容时态连贯起来