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I live in the residential area, my star, and also suburban near the station, I think the traffic is very convenient. A total of 11 in our house building, there are many households, more than 300 feet. Area road, there are many trees, spacious and elegant environment. In this beautiful living environment is very comfortable. In supermarket, parking area, kindergarten, life is very convenient. And the people whomi, help each other, life harmony. I have more friends. I like it here, I hope that the community becomes more and more beautiful
解题思路： 注意书面表达，要符合英语句式。不要写汉语式作文。注意形容词与名词的用法。
解题过程：
I live in the改为a residential area, my star, and also suburban near the station, 不通顺，可改为The suburban is near the station I think the traffic is very convenient此句较好. A total of 11 in our house building,改为There are 11 buildings totally in our area. There are many households, more than 300 feet. Area road, there are many trees,加and spacious and elegant environment. In 去掉in This beautiful living environment is very comfortable. In supermarket, parking area, kindergarten, life is very convenient. 改为 There are supermarkets parking areas, and kindergartens ,And the people whomi, help each other, life 加is harmony 改为 harmonious. I have more 改为 many friends. I like it here, I hope that the community becomes more and more beautiful此句较好
最终答案：略
解题过程：
I live in the改为a residential area, my star, and also suburban near the station, 不通顺，可改为The suburban is near the station I think the traffic is very convenient此句较好. A total of 11 in our house building,改为There are 11 buildings totally in our area. There are many households, more than 300 feet. Area road, there are many trees,加and spacious and elegant environment. In 去掉in This beautiful living environment is very comfortable. In supermarket, parking area, kindergarten, life is very convenient. 改为 There are supermarkets parking areas, and kindergartens ,And the people whomi, help each other, life 加is harmony 改为 harmonious. I have more 改为 many friends. I like it here, I hope that the community becomes more and more beautiful此句较好
最终答案：略