作业帮英语的一分钟演讲,进来帮我改改吧!急
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英语的一分钟演讲,进来帮我改改吧!急
参加一个比赛,帮我改改,
Hello everyone,It’s really a great honnor to have this opportunity for introducing myself.I’m from Wenzhou middle school.My name is Vera .Now I’m 16.To be honest,I am a shy girl,so I hope my English pronunciation can be improved according to join this competition.In my spare time,I often go to the library.Reading is my favorite,especially the novel.I also like watching movis such as the Twilight,and the High School Musicial and so on.By the way,I like English,because it is a bridge,laking all countries togother.And I am working great hard in learning English.But I know it isn’t enough,so I will practice more often so as to improve myself.I think learning language is really hard but interesting,so I want to major in a foreign language in the future.But to be honest,I’m also interested in medical.It’s really hard for me to determine.And I think only the time will tell.That’s all,thank you for your attention.
帮我改得通畅点吧！
参加一个比赛,帮我改改,
Hello everyone,It’s really a great honnor to have this opportunity for introducing myself.I’m from Wenzhou middle school.My name is Vera .Now I’m 16.To be honest,I am a shy girl,so I hope my English pronunciation can be improved according to join this competition.In my spare time,I often go to the library.Reading is my favorite,especially the novel.I also like watching movis such as the Twilight,and the High School Musicial and so on.By the way,I like English,because it is a bridge,laking all countries togother.And I am working great hard in learning English.But I know it isn’t enough,so I will practice more often so as to improve myself.I think learning language is really hard but interesting,so I want to major in a foreign language in the future.But to be honest,I’m also interested in medical.It’s really hard for me to determine.And I think only the time will tell.That’s all,thank you for your attention.
帮我改得通畅点吧！
1.according to join this competition 貌似这儿有点问题...改成through joining this competition 或者 joining也不要啦
2.especially the novel 个人认为直接 especially novels
3.movis--movies
4.laking 是要表达“联系、联结”的意思吗?应该是把 linking 写错了吧...
5.I know it isn’t enough 没错,但我个人喜欢 I know that's not enough
稍微看了下,就发现这些吧,提点建议,
2.especially the novel 个人认为直接 especially novels
3.movis--movies
4.laking 是要表达“联系、联结”的意思吗?应该是把 linking 写错了吧...
5.I know it isn’t enough 没错,但我个人喜欢 I know that's not enough
稍微看了下,就发现这些吧,提点建议,