作业帮懂英语的帮我看看这篇小作文有没有错误,有错误帮忙说下,
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懂英语的帮我看看这篇小作文有没有错误,有错误帮忙说下,
My dream is to have a quality life.But now I know that I need to do a lot of things .First I want to study hard and get good grades .Then I will go to a good university and have a good job in the future.Finally I will get much knowledge and money .This is my dream I believe that one day my dream will come true
My dream is to have a quality life.But now I know that I need to do a lot of things .First I want to study hard and get good grades .Then I will go to a good university and have a good job in the future.Finally I will get much knowledge and money .This is my dream I believe that one day my dream will come true
如果这是一个小学三年级学生写的,那还不错!在语法上：就只有第一句有点小问题,不能说是a quality life.根据你想表达的意思最好是high quality of life.这篇文章最大的缺点是用的是chinglish,即中国式英语.在考试时很忌讳这种写法,这种作文没什么亮点,淡然无味.容易让别人觉得水平不高!