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帮我改一篇关于巧克力的英语文章,快
One of the few foods which appeals to people all over the world is chocolate.Developed by the Aztecs in South America,chocolate was brought to Europe by Spanish explorers around 1500 and soon became a fashionable drink.By the 19th century the Swiss had learned how to make it into a solid form which could be eaten rather than drunk.Chocolate bars rapidly became a popular snack for Europeans and people in most parts of the world.\x0b The word chocolate is the name for the Aztec goddess of love.It has always been one of the most popular gifts between lovers,especially on Valentine's Day.In fact,chocolate contains a chemical that can produce a feeling of pleasure and contentment.\x0b Compared with other sweet-tasting snacks,chocolate is probably healthier.It contains good levels of many nutritious elements.It is stimulating and energy-giving.Although its fat content is high,it is no higher than ice-cream and French fries.And recent research has shown that much of the fat content in it cannot be absorbed by the body and 75% of the saturated fat in chocolate contains a substance which actually helps digestion.However,if you eat too much chocolate,it will make you fat,as is true of many other foods.
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One of the few foods which appeals to people all over the world is chocolate.Developed by the Aztecs in South America,chocolate was brought to Europe by Spanish explorers around 1500 and soon became a fashionable drink.By the 19th century the Swiss had learned how to make it into a solid form which could be eaten rather than drunk.Chocolate bars rapidly became a popular snack for Europeans and people in most parts of the world.\x0b The word chocolate is the name for the Aztec goddess of love.It has always been one of the most popular gifts between lovers,especially on Valentine's Day.In fact,chocolate contains a chemical that can produce a feeling of pleasure and contentment.\x0b Compared with other sweet-tasting snacks,chocolate is probably healthier.It contains good levels of many nutritious elements.It is stimulating and energy-giving.Although its fat content is high,it is no higher than ice-cream and French fries.And recent research has shown that much of the fat content in it cannot be absorbed by the body and 75% of the saturated fat in chocolate contains a substance which actually helps digestion.However,if you eat too much chocolate,it will make you fat,as is true of many other foods.
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Clinging to the window,my nose easily smells out the familiar flavor pervading in the small chocolate store.I gulp down the saliva after a piece of chocolate melts in my mouth,and even could not help closing my eyes to enjoy the marvelous feeling.Oh,Chocolate,my favorite!
你可以加上这个,不知好吗?
你可以加上这个,不知好吗?