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Do you think having a hobby is good for people's life?In what way?
-Of course good,because i think hobby is not work,some rest kind of
When i imagine about a work that give me feel enjoying and hard
but hobby just give me enjoying.
Are there any negative effects of a person spending too much time on their hobby?
What are they?
- If you have much money i could say just whatever
but usually doing a work is important than playing a hobby.
If you spend too much time on hobby,You couldn't consentrating about doing a work.
Why do you think people need to have an interest or hobby?
-This question having a connect with why we live?
If we have no interest or hobby ,there is no funny to our life.
In your country.how much time do people spend on work and how much time on leisure?Is this a good balancd,do you think?
-Most people working hard on every week and They just have a time on weekend
I hope to have more time about spending hobby,but People couldn't do everything what they want.
Would you say the amount of free time has changed much in the last fifty years?
-Obviously,see around.
Do you think people will have more or less free time in the future?Why?
-Ordinary people will have less free time than before,because The competiton about founding work will be more and more intensify.

Do you think of having a hobby is good for people's life?In which aspect?
-Of course it is good,because i think hobby is not work.
When i imagine about a work that may make me feel happy and difficult,
but hobby just gives me pleasure.
Are there any negative effects of a person that spends too much time on their hobbies?
What are they?
- If you have much money,i could say whatever I think do a work is important than a hobby.
If you spend too much time on hobby,You couldn't consentrate on doing a work.
Why do you think people need to have an interest or hobby?
-This question has a connection with why we live?
If we have no interest or hobby ,there is no happiness of our life.
In your country.how much time do people spend on work or leisure?Does it have a good balance,what do you think?
-Most people work hard every week and they just have little time on weekends.
I hope to have much more time on hobbies,but people cannot do everything they want.
Would you say the amount of free time has changed a lot during the last fifty years?
-Obviously,see around.
Do you think people will have more or less free time in the future?Why?
-Ordinary people will have less free time than before,because the competiton about finding a job will be more and more intense.