作业帮求高手指点语法错误……急!
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求高手指点语法错误……急!
My dream
Sometime,I wish I could fly.But more times.I hope I can be a singer.
Everyone has his dream.I also have my dream .My dream is be a famous singer.In the job,I can get lots of money.
This job is very busy ,but also very interesting.And I may have lots of fans.
My parents don't want me to become a singer,But I won't give up,I will hard for my dream.
I want to be a singer ,not because I can have lots of fans and money.Because I like singing!
尽快
My dream
Sometime,I wish I could fly.But more times.I hope I can be a singer.
Everyone has his dream.I also have my dream .My dream is be a famous singer.In the job,I can get lots of money.
This job is very busy ,but also very interesting.And I may have lots of fans.
My parents don't want me to become a singer,But I won't give up,I will hard for my dream.
I want to be a singer ,not because I can have lots of fans and money.Because I like singing!
尽快
1,sometime,在某个时候,如果你想表达有时候,应该用sometimes.
2,更多时候是more often,而不是more times,完全不是那意思,表示“更多次”
3,My dream is be a famous singer改成My dream is to be a famous singer.
4,This job is very busy ,but also very interesting去掉also,因为一般not only...but also连用,“不仅…而且…”,感情色彩一样.
5,改成My parents don't want me to become a singer,but I won't give up,and I will work hard for my dream.要注意,一个句子里的分句必须用连词连接.注意大小写.
6,Because I like singing!不单独成句,只能做原因状语.加到前面一句去,but because I like singing.
2,更多时候是more often,而不是more times,完全不是那意思,表示“更多次”
3,My dream is be a famous singer改成My dream is to be a famous singer.
4,This job is very busy ,but also very interesting去掉also,因为一般not only...but also连用,“不仅…而且…”,感情色彩一样.
5,改成My parents don't want me to become a singer,but I won't give up,and I will work hard for my dream.要注意,一个句子里的分句必须用连词连接.注意大小写.
6,Because I like singing!不单独成句,只能做原因状语.加到前面一句去,but because I like singing.