作业帮求英语高手查看语法错误.
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求英语高手查看语法错误.
In this article Mansell.Review the trend of smoking for the young is on the rise and point out some approaches to prevent or solve the issue.The author use data gained from the experiment and The FDA,which is meant to protect the American consumer.They put people into three different groups and each group gains different things,in six months,they got the data about what they expected to get.Their research focuses on standardizing the habit of smoking for the young and how do parents help their children to quit smoking.This article is useful to my research topic,it covers that there are a several ways of stopping the young from swallowing in smoking,such as do more exercises.the main limitation is that there are no others experiments to support his opinion,only one experiment cannot convince people to believe what it is.Thus the author indicates that further study is needed into teenage smoking to find what works best,therefore more experiments will be testing in the future and outcomes will be showing as soon as possible.
In this article Mansell.Review the trend of smoking for the young is on the rise and point out some approaches to prevent or solve the issue.The author use data gained from the experiment and The FDA,which is meant to protect the American consumer.They put people into three different groups and each group gains different things,in six months,they got the data about what they expected to get.Their research focuses on standardizing the habit of smoking for the young and how do parents help their children to quit smoking.This article is useful to my research topic,it covers that there are a several ways of stopping the young from swallowing in smoking,such as do more exercises.the main limitation is that there are no others experiments to support his opinion,only one experiment cannot convince people to believe what it is.Thus the author indicates that further study is needed into teenage smoking to find what works best,therefore more experiments will be testing in the future and outcomes will be showing as soon as possible.
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