作业帮达人来帮忙改下语法错误,
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达人来帮忙改下语法错误,
Vicissitudes of life,love and hate,allrelated to man’s survival and development.Love and hate,vicissitudes of lifeis the theme hard to avoid by any drama.Life this live drama is essentiallysimilar with the small animal in children’s cartoons.But people is differentwith animals,human is the advanced species of animals.But any animal,nomatter noble or low,the bottom line is to the survival and development.Tomeet all kinds of desire (need).The essence of life is constantly satisfyvarious desires (From another perspective,that is ambition,ideal and goal).Thefundamental problem of the life finally can be attributed to such a problem,that is,a person is good or evil.People in psychological always put thebeautiful or handsome,kind,aspirant,honesty,patience,hardships and rewardsassociated with a good man; and the ugly,lazy,greedy,vicious,false,evil invillain’s head.People who want to survival and development in the society,strictlyspeaking,everyone has a good side,also has the evil side.Personaldevelopment in order to survive and at the same time considering other people'ssurvival and development,is the good side of human nature.Instead,considertheir own desire while ignoring others,and even have the satisfaction of inviolation of others,the society,is the evil side of human nature.
Vicissitudes of life,love and hate,allrelated to man’s survival and development.Love and hate,vicissitudes of lifeis the theme hard to avoid by any drama.Life this live drama is essentiallysimilar with the small animal in children’s cartoons.But people is differentwith animals,human is the advanced species of animals.But any animal,nomatter noble or low,the bottom line is to the survival and development.Tomeet all kinds of desire (need).The essence of life is constantly satisfyvarious desires (From another perspective,that is ambition,ideal and goal).Thefundamental problem of the life finally can be attributed to such a problem,that is,a person is good or evil.People in psychological always put thebeautiful or handsome,kind,aspirant,honesty,patience,hardships and rewardsassociated with a good man; and the ugly,lazy,greedy,vicious,false,evil invillain’s head.People who want to survival and development in the society,strictlyspeaking,everyone has a good side,also has the evil side.Personaldevelopment in order to survive and at the same time considering other people'ssurvival and development,is the good side of human nature.Instead,considertheir own desire while ignoring others,and even have the satisfaction of inviolation of others,the society,is the evil side of human nature.
Vicissitudes of life,love and hate(,删除) all (related 改为一般现在时的谓语动词 relate) to man’s survival and development.Love and hate,vicissitudes of life (,改为同位语) (is 改为 are,与Love and hate 保持主谓一致) the theme hard to avoid by any drama.(Life this live drama 改为 Life of the live drama 或Life,this live drama,) is essentially similar (with 改为 to) the small animal in children’s cartoons.But people is different (with 改为 from) animals,human is the advanced species of (animals指不包括人在内的动物,是否改为生物life-forms).But any (animal 呼应上文,也改为life-form) ,no matter (noble or low 建议改为 it is higher or lower),the bottom line is (to the survival and development 改为宾语从句 whether it can survive and develop) (.To此处删除句号后把 to 小写,改为目的状语) meet all kinds of desire (desire 指强烈的愿望,need 指对必需品的要求和需求,后者为好).The essence of life is (添加to变为不定式才可以做表语) constantly satisfy various (desires 改为 need) (From another perspective,that is ambition,ideal and goal).The fundamental problem of the life finally can be attributed to such a problem,that is,a person is good or evil.People (in psychological 形容词不能作介词宾语,改为副词psychologically 直接作状语) always put the (beautiful or handsome,kind,aspirant 都是形容词,不能和后面的名词并列,改为 beauty,kindness,good appearance),honesty,patience,hardships and rewards associated with a good man; and the (ugly,lazy,greedy,vicious,false 改形容词为名词 ugliness,laziness,greediness,viciousness,falseness),evil in villain’s head.People who want to (survival and development 改为动词survive and develop) in the society,strictly speaking,(everyone has,删除重复主语everyone,has 改为 have 与 people 保持人称一致 ) a good side,also (has 或者用 have,或者省略) the evil side.Personal development,in order to survive and at the same time considering other people’s survival and development,is the good side of human nature.Instead,(consider 改为动名词 considering 才能作主语) their own desire while ignoring others(,删除逗号) and even (have 同上,改为 having) the satisfaction of in-violation of others,the society,(is 前面的主语是两个并列的动名词短语,改为 are) the evil side of human nature.
整理如下：
Vicissitudes of life,love and hate all relate to man’s survival and development.Love and hate,vicissitudes of life are the theme hard to avoid by any drama.Life of the live drama is essentially similar to the small animal in children’s cartoons.But people is different from) animals,human is the advanced species of life-forms.But any life-form,no matter it is higher or lower,the bottom line is whether it can survive and develop to meet all kinds need.The essence of life is to constantly satisfy various need) (From another perspective,that is ambition,ideal and goal).The fundamental problem of the life finally can be attributed to such a problem,that is,a person is good or evil.People psychologically always put the beauty,kindness,good appearance,honesty,patience,hardships and rewards associated with a good man; and the ugliness,laziness,greediness,viciousness,falseness,evil in villain’s head.People who want to survive and develop in the society,strictly speaking,have a good side,also an evil side.Personal development,in order to survive and at the same time considering other people’s survival and development is the good side of human nature.Instead,considering their own desire while ignoring others and even having the satisfaction of in-violation of others,the society,are the evil side of human nature.
整理如下：
Vicissitudes of life,love and hate all relate to man’s survival and development.Love and hate,vicissitudes of life are the theme hard to avoid by any drama.Life of the live drama is essentially similar to the small animal in children’s cartoons.But people is different from) animals,human is the advanced species of life-forms.But any life-form,no matter it is higher or lower,the bottom line is whether it can survive and develop to meet all kinds need.The essence of life is to constantly satisfy various need) (From another perspective,that is ambition,ideal and goal).The fundamental problem of the life finally can be attributed to such a problem,that is,a person is good or evil.People psychologically always put the beauty,kindness,good appearance,honesty,patience,hardships and rewards associated with a good man; and the ugliness,laziness,greediness,viciousness,falseness,evil in villain’s head.People who want to survive and develop in the society,strictly speaking,have a good side,also an evil side.Personal development,in order to survive and at the same time considering other people’s survival and development is the good side of human nature.Instead,considering their own desire while ignoring others and even having the satisfaction of in-violation of others,the society,are the evil side of human nature.