作业帮帮我修改一下英语作文,有什么毛病都指出来
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帮我修改一下英语作文,有什么毛病都指出来
Working Individually or Working in a team
There are basically two ways to get work .One is to work individually.In this way,they need to solve probilms in their own.Besides,they can plan for thenselves what to do.Working individually is benefits for us to have a habit of think indenpently.
The other way is to work in a team.In this way ,students can solve problems together.They will get correct conclude,which after disussion.So they can study each other and strenthen their power of cooperation.
Compare with this two ways .I prefre to work in a team .Actually,teamwork is more improtant in our life .Under normal circumstances,teanwork is reqeired in order to reached some aims
Working Individually or Working in a team
There are basically two ways to get work .One is to work individually.In this way,they need to solve probilms in their own.Besides,they can plan for thenselves what to do.Working individually is benefits for us to have a habit of think indenpently.
The other way is to work in a team.In this way ,students can solve problems together.They will get correct conclude,which after disussion.So they can study each other and strenthen their power of cooperation.
Compare with this two ways .I prefre to work in a team .Actually,teamwork is more improtant in our life .Under normal circumstances,teanwork is reqeired in order to reached some aims
Working individually is benefits for us 这句话不对,应该改成这样：Working individually is beneficial for us to have a habit of thinking independengtly.
They will get correct conclude which after discussion这句话也不对,应该改成这样：They will get correct conclusions after discussion.后面的也不对,应该是：So they can learn from each other
后面的compare with this two ways也不对,应该是comparing these two ways,I prefer to work in a team.后面important拼写错误了,teamwork也拼写错误.最后一句改成：in order to achieve some goals
They will get correct conclude which after discussion这句话也不对,应该改成这样：They will get correct conclusions after discussion.后面的也不对,应该是：So they can learn from each other
后面的compare with this two ways也不对,应该是comparing these two ways,I prefer to work in a team.后面important拼写错误了,teamwork也拼写错误.最后一句改成：in order to achieve some goals