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Why would you prefer to take a bus?
Firstly,Compared to the subway,the bus stop is near my house.Walk to the bus stop only takes 5 minutes.
secondly,I think that the bus can go to any place where I want to go.
finally,bus has windows.so take the bus,i can enjoying the scenery.
for those reasons,I prefer to take a bus.
Why would you prefer to take the subway?
Firstly,the Subway is much faster than the bus.take the subway,I can save much time.
Secondly,the city I am living is always in traffic jam,I also prefer the subway because of that is no traffic jams.It's the safest form of transportation.
Finally,because the subway is runs on schedule.We can follow the time to take the subway.
For those reasons,I prefer to take the subway.
Why would you prefer to take a bus?
Firstly,Compared to the subway,the bus stop is near my house.Walk to the bus stop only takes 5 minutes.
secondly,I think that the bus can go to any place where I want to go.
finally,bus has windows.so take the bus,i can enjoying the scenery.
for those reasons,I prefer to take a bus.
Why would you prefer to take the subway?
Firstly,the Subway is much faster than the bus.take the subway,I can save much time.
Secondly,the city I am living is always in traffic jam,I also prefer the subway because of that is no traffic jams.It's the safest form of transportation.
Finally,because the subway is runs on schedule.We can follow the time to take the subway.
For those reasons,I prefer to take the subway.
第一问 我自己帮你润色的地方
①the bus stop is near my house.Walk to the bus stop only takes 5 minutes.
→the distance to the bus stop is shorter.Walking to the bus stop only takes 5 minutes.
②I think that the bus can go to any place where I want to go.
→From my point fo view,the bus can take me anywhere I'd like to go.
③so take the bus,i can enjoying the scenery.
→So I can enjoy the scenery outside the window when I’m on a bus.
第二问
①take the subway,I can save much time.
→I can save much time by taking the subway.
②the city I am living is always in traffic jam
→ the city I am living in has serious problem of traffic jam
③I also prefer the subway because of that is no traffic jams.
→There is another advantage of the subway--no traffic jams.
④the subway is runs on schedule语法错误
→the subway always runs on schedule
①the bus stop is near my house.Walk to the bus stop only takes 5 minutes.
→the distance to the bus stop is shorter.Walking to the bus stop only takes 5 minutes.
②I think that the bus can go to any place where I want to go.
→From my point fo view,the bus can take me anywhere I'd like to go.
③so take the bus,i can enjoying the scenery.
→So I can enjoy the scenery outside the window when I’m on a bus.
第二问
①take the subway,I can save much time.
→I can save much time by taking the subway.
②the city I am living is always in traffic jam
→ the city I am living in has serious problem of traffic jam
③I also prefer the subway because of that is no traffic jams.
→There is another advantage of the subway--no traffic jams.
④the subway is runs on schedule语法错误
→the subway always runs on schedule