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My first job
“What do you want to eat?"the manager at KFC looked down at me.
"Sorry,I don't want anything to eat.I just want a job in your company."I said.
"Why?Shouldn't you be at school?"he asked.
How could I explain?My family is poor.We only can eat two meals a day.I just want to make money to make our family rich.
"How old are you?Are you an adult?"
"Yes,I am eighteen years old."
"OK,come with me .I'll give you a job in the kitchen."
I am very happy.And this was how my first real job in KFC began.
My first job
“What do you want to eat?"the manager at KFC looked down at me.
"Sorry,I don't want anything to eat.I just want a job in your company."I said.
"Why?Shouldn't you be at school?"he asked.
How could I explain?My family is poor.We only can eat two meals a day.I just want to make money to make our family rich.
"How old are you?Are you an adult?"
"Yes,I am eighteen years old."
"OK,come with me .I'll give you a job in the kitchen."
I am very happy.And this was how my first real job in KFC began.
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