作业帮英语语法问题,帮忙改下这篇作文（日记）
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英语语法问题,帮忙改下这篇作文（日记）
Today our family to go to Tsingtao brewstery Festival,so my mother has put clothes ready.
First of all to father and convergence then high sreed to Qingdao after,On the road,I saw a billboard top write:Japanese get out of Diaoyv lslands,this was the way I fell the most exciting thing.
Arrived at the hotel very late alveady,but I still piayed computer fora while,have a look the news,then sleep ,because tomorrow's activities.
What a funny day.
这个是我手打,可能有一些错误,请见谅
Today our family to go to Tsingtao brewstery Festival,so my mother has put clothes ready.
First of all to father and convergence then high sreed to Qingdao after,On the road,I saw a billboard top write:Japanese get out of Diaoyv lslands,this was the way I fell the most exciting thing.
Arrived at the hotel very late alveady,but I still piayed computer fora while,have a look the news,then sleep ,because tomorrow's activities.
What a funny day.
这个是我手打,可能有一些错误,请见谅
Today our family is going to Tsingtao brewstery Festival,and my mother has put clothes ready.
First of all ,my father drave fast to QingDao with us ,which was amazing .On the road,I saw a billboard top write:Japanese get out of Diaoyv lslands,which was the exciting thing i saw.
Arriving at the hotel very late already,I still played computer for a while.Then i had a look at the news and sleep because of tomorrow's activities.
What a fun day!
建议你写写玩的什么内容,更好
First of all ,my father drave fast to QingDao with us ,which was amazing .On the road,I saw a billboard top write:Japanese get out of Diaoyv lslands,which was the exciting thing i saw.
Arriving at the hotel very late already,I still played computer for a while.Then i had a look at the news and sleep because of tomorrow's activities.
What a fun day!
建议你写写玩的什么内容,更好