作业帮英语改错,（共10处）
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英语改错,（共10处）
Xiao Ming fell sound asleep on sofa with the TV on,His mother couldn't help shout at him after reminding him for such many times.There were many reasons for environmental phenomenon .without the cultivation of good habits and the aware of environmental protection ,people may easily commit mistakes.And the lack in school education also contributes a lot to this phenomenon.For my perspective ,it's vital important to call on the government or citizens to take action immediately .Everyone’s effort in daily life may lead a huge step forward in building an energy saving and environment protecting the society .I Firmly believe that with our incredible energy and great efforts,we will finally make it.
Xiao Ming fell sound asleep on sofa with the TV on,His mother couldn't help shout at him after reminding him for such many times.There were many reasons for environmental phenomenon .without the cultivation of good habits and the aware of environmental protection ,people may easily commit mistakes.And the lack in school education also contributes a lot to this phenomenon.For my perspective ,it's vital important to call on the government or citizens to take action immediately .Everyone’s effort in daily life may lead a huge step forward in building an energy saving and environment protecting the society .I Firmly believe that with our incredible energy and great efforts,we will finally make it.
1.asleep改为sleep 2.on改为in 3.shout改为shouting 4.去掉for 5.aware改为awareness 6.the改为a 7.For改为From 8.去掉vital或important 9.lead加to 10.去掉the