作业帮短文改错 （共10处错误）
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短文改错 （共10处错误）
A man worked very hard every day so that his family will live a better life.Unfortunate,he died very yough,at age of40.Afer he died,he was sure be would go to Heaven bease of he worked so hard for his family.Therefore,he was stopped at the gate to Heaven and was tlod he should go to Hell."Why?"he asked,confusing."Look at your family!They're all in great sad now because of your death.You didn't value your health.People like them can't go to Heaven."Hear that,the man became silent and realized he should have valued his heslth.His family needed him less than they needed money.
A man worked very hard every day so that his family will live a better life.Unfortunate,he died very yough,at age of40.Afer he died,he was sure be would go to Heaven bease of he worked so hard for his family.Therefore,he was stopped at the gate to Heaven and was tlod he should go to Hell."Why?"he asked,confusing."Look at your family!They're all in great sad now because of your death.You didn't value your health.People like them can't go to Heaven."Hear that,the man became silent and realized he should have valued his heslth.His family needed him less than they needed money.
will-could/
Unfortunate-Unfortunatelyat age of- at the age ofbease of - becauseTherefore- Howeverconfusing- confusedin great sad- in great sadnessPeople like them-People like you
Hear that,- Hearing that,less-more
Unfortunate-Unfortunatelyat age of- at the age ofbease of - becauseTherefore- Howeverconfusing- confusedin great sad- in great sadnessPeople like them-People like you
Hear that,- Hearing that,less-more