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英语帮我看一下有没有错误!

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英语帮我看一下有没有错误!
A party of fans dressed in cleaner's work clothes went to the star's apartment.They waited outside and didn't want to leave in case they saw the star.Unluckily ,they were caught by the public security ,"get out of here fast' he said with a sneer.On the way to home,one of them said "no autograph,no group photo,it couldn't be worse.why don't we think another way.
a party of 是对的,一群
They waited outside and didn't want to leave in case they saw the star改一下后面的,didn't want to leave as they might see the star.
On the way to home把 to去掉,home 前面不需加介词
it couldn't be worse,可以在后面加any more,再糟糕不过了,not...any more
why don't we think another way 加一个of think of.或者 why don't we try in other ways?