英语翻译代子的包装,包装时是否可以把袋子躺开,因为代子密封,胶袋不透气,水分子会遗留在胶袋表面,所以会潮湿很严重,粉色熊

英语翻译
代子的包装,包装时是否可以把袋子躺开,因为代子密封,胶袋不透气,水分子会遗留在胶袋表面,所以会潮湿很严重,粉色熊是在回潮天包装出货的,所以潮湿的味道很浓.另外,我们包装时,味道已解决了放了多包干燥济,但是我不确定海运20多天,它会不会回潮.
The bag packaging ,packaging bag whether can lay open ,because the bag sealed ,plastic bag can not ventilate ,water molecules will leave behind in the plastic bag surface .so will damp .pink bear is packaged goods in the moisture ,so the damp flavor is very thick .
In addition ,we has solved bad smell ,and put many packet of desiccative in the carton .
But we not sure shipping more than 20 days ,arrive to USA,the bear whether damp ,and engender bad smell .

先替你把汉语修改一下：
关于袋子的包装,建议考虑一下是否把袋子打开为好,因为如果袋子密封的话,由于胶袋不透气,水分子会逐渐在胶袋内部凝聚,造成袋子内部潮湿问题很严重.粉色玩具熊是在回潮天包装出货的,所以本身比较潮湿.另外,我们在包装的时候,已经解决了玩具熊上面的味道问题.并且放了多包干燥剂.不过我无法确定,经过20多天的海运,这批玩具熊会不会再次回潮.
Speaking of packaging,I suggest tha you lay the bags open for should it be a sealed bag,the moisture might gather inside the bag by a large amount,which will cause a severe moisture problem for the toys inside.The pink toy bears were packaged on a wet day,so they were moistened after that.However,we have solved this problem by putting many small bags of desiccant inside the packages.But I'm not sure whether those toy bears might get moistened again after a 20-day-plus voyage.
再问： 真的谢谢你
再答： 不过这句，“另外，我们包装时，味道已解决了放了多包干燥济”。你这个“味道”是什么意思？不知道我改过的句子是不是你的愿意，但是有感觉突然间说到味道很突兀。是笔误吧？没有味道这个东西在里面吧？
再问： 就是潮湿产生的味道
再答： 哦，那译文再修改一下。Speaking of packaging,I suggest that you lay the bags open for should it be a sealed bag,the water molecules might gather inside the bag by a large amount,which will cause a severe moisture problem for the toys inside.The pink toy bears were packaged on a wet day,so they had got some unpleasant smell due to the moisture.However,we have solved this problem by putting many small bags of desiccant inside the packages.But I'm not sure whether those toy bears might get moistened again after a 20-day-plus voyage.