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please!帮我修改一下英语作文.
My Summer Holiday Scheme
This the last holiday for my primary school life. It is no homework and not things about school to do. What a blank holiday it is ! But I don’t want that. Because I think my holiday should be more meaningful, not like this, nothing to do, that is so boring and vain. So I need to do somethings to make it be more substantial, I like substantial feeling.
Now, let me tell you my plans of this summer holiday. First, I think I need to learn somethings that is useful. So I come here to have the classes of English and Math. I suppose those may help me in the future or when I need it. After that, I will read a lot of books and do many exercises for my English and Math. Because I will have a very big and serious exam. Will I go to the best class is hinge on it. Then you know how important that is.
Third, I will often visit my Grandparents. Because in a way, they are lonely. They need someone often talk with them even play with them, just like the children. So, I will often do that, to make them feel more happy.
Fourth, I will do some sports, to keep fit. You may know, how important heathy is……
I think I need to stop. My paper is not long enough if I wirte to much. And, these are my summer holiday scheme. I will finish them on time. I promise.
My Summer Holiday Scheme
This the last holiday for my primary school life. It is no homework and not things about school to do. What a blank holiday it is ! But I don’t want that. Because I think my holiday should be more meaningful, not like this, nothing to do, that is so boring and vain. So I need to do somethings to make it be more substantial, I like substantial feeling.
Now, let me tell you my plans of this summer holiday. First, I think I need to learn somethings that is useful. So I come here to have the classes of English and Math. I suppose those may help me in the future or when I need it. After that, I will read a lot of books and do many exercises for my English and Math. Because I will have a very big and serious exam. Will I go to the best class is hinge on it. Then you know how important that is.
Third, I will often visit my Grandparents. Because in a way, they are lonely. They need someone often talk with them even play with them, just like the children. So, I will often do that, to make them feel more happy.
Fourth, I will do some sports, to keep fit. You may know, how important heathy is……
I think I need to stop. My paper is not long enough if I wirte to much. And, these are my summer holiday scheme. I will finish them on time. I promise.
My Summer Holiday Scheme
This (is) the last holiday for(during) my primary school life. It(there) is no homework to do. What a blank(?free) holiday it is ! But I don’t (去掉want that)(like the way). Because I think my holiday should be more meaningful, not like this, nothing to do, that is so boring and vain. So I need(decide) to do something(s) to make it (be)(去掉) more substantial（,）（.） I （去掉like substantial feeling.）（enjoy the sense of achievement.）
Now, let me tell you my plans (去掉of this summer holiday）. First, I think I need to learn somethings （去掉that is） useful (for my study). So I come here to have the classes of English and Math. I (去掉suppose)(hope) those （courses） may（will） help me in the future （or when I need it）. After that, I will read a lot of books and do many exercises （去掉for）（about） my English and Math. （去掉Because） I will have a （very） big （and serious） exam (which is important to me). (if) (去掉Will I)(I will) go to the best class (去掉is hinge on)(depends on)（去掉it）（my grades）.（ 去掉Then you know how important that is.）
Third, I will often visit my Grandparents. （Because） in a way, they are lonely. They need someone （to） talk with them even play with them, just like the children. So I will (often do that)(try my best ) to make them feel more happy.
Fourth, I will do some sports to keep fit. (You may know, how important heathy is……)(As is known,heath is important to everyone.)
(去掉I think I need to stop. My paper is not long enough if I wirte to much). （And,）（As a whole） these are my (ideas about )summer holiday (去掉scheme). （I will finish them on time. I promise）（I promise to myself that I will realise them on time.）
This (is) the last holiday for(during) my primary school life. It(there) is no homework to do. What a blank(?free) holiday it is ! But I don’t (去掉want that)(like the way). Because I think my holiday should be more meaningful, not like this, nothing to do, that is so boring and vain. So I need(decide) to do something(s) to make it (be)(去掉) more substantial（,）（.） I （去掉like substantial feeling.）（enjoy the sense of achievement.）
Now, let me tell you my plans (去掉of this summer holiday）. First, I think I need to learn somethings （去掉that is） useful (for my study). So I come here to have the classes of English and Math. I (去掉suppose)(hope) those （courses） may（will） help me in the future （or when I need it）. After that, I will read a lot of books and do many exercises （去掉for）（about） my English and Math. （去掉Because） I will have a （very） big （and serious） exam (which is important to me). (if) (去掉Will I)(I will) go to the best class (去掉is hinge on)(depends on)（去掉it）（my grades）.（ 去掉Then you know how important that is.）
Third, I will often visit my Grandparents. （Because） in a way, they are lonely. They need someone （to） talk with them even play with them, just like the children. So I will (often do that)(try my best ) to make them feel more happy.
Fourth, I will do some sports to keep fit. (You may know, how important heathy is……)(As is known,heath is important to everyone.)
(去掉I think I need to stop. My paper is not long enough if I wirte to much). （And,）（As a whole） these are my (ideas about )summer holiday (去掉scheme). （I will finish them on time. I promise）（I promise to myself that I will realise them on time.）