作业帮英语作文,请帮我修改一下,
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英语作文,请帮我修改一下,
假如你是刘芳,你的好朋友李琳想要认识马克,请你向他介绍李琳,并问他是否愿意.
Dear mark,
It’s a long time since I saw you last time.I’m writing to you to introduce my friend Li lin to you.
Li lin is very beautiful.She has long curly black hair.So she is more outgoing.She is very funny and often makes others happy.And her favorite subject is English.Because she wants to travel around the world when she is older.It’s important for her to 实现 dream.
Do you want to make friends with her?I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours ,
Liu fang
假如你是刘芳,你的好朋友李琳想要认识马克,请你向他介绍李琳,并问他是否愿意.
Dear mark,
It’s a long time since I saw you last time.I’m writing to you to introduce my friend Li lin to you.
Li lin is very beautiful.She has long curly black hair.So she is more outgoing.She is very funny and often makes others happy.And her favorite subject is English.Because she wants to travel around the world when she is older.It’s important for her to 实现 dream.
Do you want to make friends with her?I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours ,
Liu fang
第一行,It has been a long time
第二行：Lilin is a very beautiful girl 而且貌似有长发和OUTGOING没有关联吧.
可以改为 she has long curly black hair,and she is outgoing.
第三行 And her favorite subjest is English because she want to learn English to help her travel around the world when she become old.It's important for her to achieve her dream.
第二行：Lilin is a very beautiful girl 而且貌似有长发和OUTGOING没有关联吧.
可以改为 she has long curly black hair,and she is outgoing.
第三行 And her favorite subjest is English because she want to learn English to help her travel around the world when she become old.It's important for her to achieve her dream.