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英语翻译开始在网上在线翻译,结果牛头不对马嘴,实在对洋人的非主流字母没辙了,大家帮个忙,只有一段了!“.由于我国长期存在

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英语翻译
开始在网上在线翻译,结果牛头不对马嘴,实在对洋人的非主流字母没辙了,大家帮个忙,只有一段了!
“.由于我国长期存在着城乡二元结构,使农村社会养老保险始终处于发展缓甚至停滞的状况,农村养老保险覆盖率低,保障水平低,财政支持力度不够等问题依然存在.本文在回顾我国农村社会养老保险发展历程的基础上,总结了目前我国农村社会养老保险制度设计本身的缺陷及其执行过程中存在的问题,并结合我国实际,提出加快立法进程、加大宣传力度、提高农民收入、加强工作队伍的建设、实现农保基金的保值增值和健全管理、监督和给付机制等可行性对策建议.”
你好,很高兴翻译这样的文章.以下是本人的若干个人观点,仅供参考.
1 第一句中的“使”字是否可以考虑删去?
2 全文的第二个逗号是否可以考虑换成分号 ?
3 最后一句结构太长太冗,是否可以考虑再整理一下?
Due to the long-existing urban - rural dichotomy in our country, the development of rural social pension insurance has been stunted or obstacled for long. There are still problems such as low insurance coverage, low security level and inadequate financial support. This thesis, retrospecting the history of rural social pension insurance, concludes the drawbacks of the system itself and problems during the implement. In addition, the thesis promote several feasible suggestions such as accelerating the legislation, strengthening the propaganda, raising the incomes of farmers, reinforcing the construction of workforce, realization of maintaining and increaseing the value, as well as improvement of administration,supervision and payment system.
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