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It says that Every heart has its own sorrow.for sure,when we was worn in the world ,so many frustrations and difficults had already got ready to test us out ,It is the unforeseen that always happens.traffic accident.Floodwater.Illness ,there are so many unforeseen things in our lives ,we always don’t know what will happen to us in the future ,even the next second..when we caught difficults wo yearn for others’ helps,others’ helps are so important to us that I can’t imagine life without them.
We also need others’ help in everyday life ,the other day ,I had a stomachache,I feel so suffering,my best friend give me a cup of hot water ,told me to have the medicine ,she also cleaned the classroom instead of me (that day ,I was on duty) I couldn’t be thankful enough to her for her help.
All of above tells us one truth——people need other’ helps ,do you know volunteers,they are one of this kind of people who always do things for others ,but never asks for any reward,They does their work zealously and earnestly,They devote their whole life to people who are in trouble..they are ordinary people,but Their spirit makes them a hero in everyone’s harts,it influences everyone ,and reminds me to help others If someone asks me a question -----who is the greatest person in the world ,I will answer him without a scruple----volunteers,of course!

It is said that every heart has its own sorrow..yes,living in the world,we must experience lots of frustrations and difficulties,which are unforeseen,traffic accident,floodwater,illness,etc.we can’t predict that when they will happen...when we have difficulties,we can turn to others,others' help are so important to us that I can’t imagine how the life will be without it.
Help is needed in everyone’s daily life.One day,I had a stomachache,I felt terrible.my best friend looked after me carefully.No words can express my thankfulness to her for the help .He offered me a cup of hot water,and told me to have the medicine.In addition,she also cleaned the classroom instead of me (that day,I was on duty).
All of above tell us a truth——everyone needs help .Do you know volunteers,they are a group of people who always help others without expecting any rewards.They devote their whole life to people who need help.They are heroes who are ordinary people but have noble-minded spirits ,such as the volunteers of the 2008 Olympic Games.They give helps to the 2008 Olympic Games,but ask nothing they only want to make a contribution to China.they set examples for us to help others.If someone asks me this question -----who is the greatest person in the world ,I will replied him without hesitation ----volunteers!
My friend’s help makes me moved and let me get out of trouble,and I think your help will make more and more people feel warm,everyone needs help,why don’t us be a warmhearted person,Give a helping hand as a volunteers and make a contribution to others .let’s create a better and nicer tomorrow together.