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下面是韩梅写的一篇文章,里面有错误,请把他们找出来并改正.

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下面是韩梅写的一篇文章,里面有错误,请把他们找出来并改正.
My Busy Day
I have a busy day yesterday.I get up before 7 o'clock at the morning,and quickly washed my hands and face.I get to school early,I had a little rest after lunch,but Idid worked hard in class all day,I played basketball after school,and then walked to home.
I got home at 4:45 in the afternoon.After I reach home,I helped my parents with the housework.I quickly cooked the supper,and clean the house.
After supper I watch TV for half an hour.Then I do my homework.I went to bed at ten o'clock.
1."I have a busy day yesterday"中have应该改成“had”,因为昨天是用过去时.
1.“I get up before 7 o'clock at the morning,”中get应该改成"got",at改成in.需要用过去时且in the morning 是在早上,不是at.
3."I get to school early,"get应该改成got,理由同上.
4.”I had a little rest after lunch“这句话没有语法错误,但不太标准,像中文一样,可以改成I rested for a while after lunch.
5."but Idid worked hard in class all day,"worked中应去掉ed,did后应该加动词原形.
6."and then walked to home"中to应删去.
7."After I reach home"和"and clean the house"中的动词应用过去时.用reached和cleaned.
8”.After supper I watch TV for half an hour.Then I do my homework“中watch应该为watched,do应该为did.用过去时.