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英语改错 这是一篇关于我自己的英语作文,我想有许多语法错误,或有一些表达不是通顺的句子,I'm a smallbird.

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英语改错
这是一篇关于我自己的英语作文,我想有许多语法错误,或有一些表达不是通顺的句子,
I'm a smallbird.Exactly say,i'm a bird,a ostrich dream of flying since childhood.I want to fly in the mountains,so exciting and free.
And I'm a shy bird born in a remote quiet peaceful mountain,so I always so lonely my childhood.I grow with birds,tall trees,high mountains,wild flowers,and waterfall in the mountains.It is a natural life.I have learned how to feel the waterfall,the mountains,the birds' song...Strong feelings towards them.They are my important part of my childhood's feeling.
But ,I desire knowledge too.I like books,heartwarming story,desire friendship.Althougha lot of bad habit is difficult to change ,such as i am a shy bird.At first,I even don`t know how to deal friendship,and express my mind exactly.I am trying to change all my bad habits.I study help others,so i want to talk with others honestly,I am afraid of someone misunderstand me.
Maybe so this is the reason of this Is who I am
I am a bird,to be exactly,I'm just an ostrich that has dreamed of flying above the mountains freely since childhood.
I was born in a remote and peaceful mountain,my childhood was lonely because I was a shy bird.I grew up with other birds,around me were tall trees,high mountains,beautiful flowers and waterfalls pouring down off the hills.I've learned how to communicate with mountains,waterfalls,and the birds that were singing in the sky.The passionate emotion I had about them had become one of the most significant feelings of my childhood.
I desire knowledge eagerly.I love books,especially those touching stories.I also desire an enduring friendship,eventhough I know it's quite difficult to change the fact that I'm a shy bird.I don't even know how to deal with a friendship,I can't express exactly what's in my mind.I've been trying hard to change my foibles.I learned to help others,so that I could talk with them frankly,I'm afraid of being misunderstood.I guess that's why I'm who I am.
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