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英文作文满分十五分,请做真实点评.An Unlucky DayYesterday i got up late.So i

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An Unlucky Day
Yesterday i got up late.So i coundn`t reach my friend`party on time.When i left home,there was heavy rain.And my clothes were wet.I am so angry.I got on the taxi,and soon i reached my friend`home.They were very angry whth me.I felt so sorry and terrible.After the party,i ran home quickly and hurt my leg.
What an unlucky day.
friend's party
And my clothes were wet 建议改成 what' more ,my clothes were wet and i was so angry.
i was so angry
with
应该是初中水平 12分 左右
再问: 这句砸翻译?
再答: 哪句? 我改的那句? what's more 就是 而且 是连接词 一般一句写好后 后面不用 and起手