英语作文改错My opinions on cheatingNowadays,exam has become one of

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My opinions on cheating
Nowadays,exam has become one of the most important tools to judge how the student is.Who can past or have a high grade has a great meaning for his school life or career.All the students try their best to pass.Cheating is one of the ways,and it’s on the rise.
There are two groups of the cheating students.The first group wants to experience new things in school.They join in the associations and take part in different kinds of activities.In this situation,they ignore the importance of knowledge and out of mind in the class.In the end of the semester,the choose cheating to pass the exams.Another group works hard on their study.They gradually notice that cheating can possibly succeed in the exam,and they find that who cheats in the exam even has a higher grade than them.For protecting the fairness between cheaters and non-cheaters,they begin to cheat too.That is because schools pay more attention to the result but process.
In my opinion,cheating absolutely should be forbidden all the time.Supervisors must strictly punish the cheaters.At the same time,school should judge the students all-rounds but the dates of the grades.In this way,I think the fairness will come again in the near future.

My opinions on cheating
Nowadays,exam has become one of the most important tools(ways) to judge how the student is(students' study).Who can past (pass)or have a high grade(score) has a great meaning for(has a prosperous future) his school life or career.All the students try their best to pass.Cheating is one of the ways,and it’s on the rise.(Cheating becomes one way to pass,and much more common today.)
There are two groups of the cheating students.The first group wants to experience(try) new things in school.They join in the associations and take part in different kinds of activities.In this situation,they ignore the importance of knowledge and ( they are )out of mind in the class.In the end of the semester,they choose cheating (as a way )to pass the exams.Another group works hard on their study.They gradually notice that cheating can possibly (help them pass)succeed in the exam,and they find that who cheats in the exam even has a higher grade than them.For protecting the fairness (To be fair)between cheaters and non-cheaters,they begin to cheat too.That is because schools pay more attention to the result but (study itself).
In my opinion,cheating absolutely should be forbidden all the time.Supervisors(school) must strictly punish the cheaters.At the same time,school should judge the students all-rounds but the dates of the grades.In this way,I think the fairness will come to us again in the near future.