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这封英语邮件开头怎么回啊.谁能给个范文之类的

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这封英语邮件开头怎么回啊.谁能给个范文之类的
In the name of our loving Savior Jesus Christ,I bless you and your family with joy,peace and good health.I am excited to helping you process your school application to study here in Southern California.I apologize for the delay to speaking with your and your parents.As soon as I recieve all the necessary documentation from you; I will expedite your enrollment process immediately.Please work on providing me the necessay documents I need to enrol you.
Please complete an esssay why you want to study here in America and indicate why you want to study at Western Christian School.Please forward it to as soon as possible.You can scan your document and email it to me so I can work on it immediately.
很官方的话语.这封信猫腻很大啊.
先委婉的寒暄两句.然后主旨来了,叫你写个短文阐述你为什么要在WCS学习,建议你尽快回信,这是个荣耀,同时也是对你的考验,请注意:文中多次提出As soon as..immediately等词汇 .所以一定要尽快.这是硬性要求.
至于回信.你这个针对性太强了.没什么范文.
就先感谢一下人家对你的bless吧,然后委婉的表达出为WCS学校的向往.主旨是如何知道了解WCS并且要前往学习的动机,话语一定要深刻感人,
最后表示一定全力配合完成程序,邮寄一切必需品.再热切的表示感激.就这样 500字足以.
再问: 好吧。大致上是明白了。她有一封题目是 Why you want to study at Western Christian School 的作文大致是该怎么写能讲一下吗?谢谢
再答: 西方人讲究直接抒发,不要绕圈子. 5点 1.万事开头难,自我小介绍一下吧.比较容易入手些. 2.从自身出发,想出去学习完善自我. 3.WCS无论各方面都吸引了你.(直接百度,历史怎么悠久啊,地理环境对于你有多便利啊) 4,从该学校的专业来讲,如何吸引你等等. 5.不要忘记感谢和赞美. 希望对你有帮助,