作业帮帮我修改一下这篇英语作文!
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帮我修改一下这篇英语作文!
As his writing is,so is he
Nowadays,the writing is very importance .As a student,we always need writing .but some people’ s writing is very good.While others just so so.
I have ever heard some adult said that:As his writing is,so is he.They also said that when you notice someone’ writing.You can know the people is tall or short,fat or thin and bad temper or good temper… Although I can’t think what they said is all right,at least some argument is reasonable.Because I always notice other’s writing,when I find someone’s writing is neatly,the fact is that the people is very scrupulous and his temper is very good.If his writing casually.I can know,I can know he is lazy.If his writing small ,I think he is not tall.So if you always notice other’s writing you can find the sentence :As his writing is ,so is he,is right .
将错误的地方帮我改正,
As his writing is,so is he
Nowadays,the writing is very importance .As a student,we always need writing .but some people’ s writing is very good.While others just so so.
I have ever heard some adult said that:As his writing is,so is he.They also said that when you notice someone’ writing.You can know the people is tall or short,fat or thin and bad temper or good temper… Although I can’t think what they said is all right,at least some argument is reasonable.Because I always notice other’s writing,when I find someone’s writing is neatly,the fact is that the people is very scrupulous and his temper is very good.If his writing casually.I can know,I can know he is lazy.If his writing small ,I think he is not tall.So if you always notice other’s writing you can find the sentence :As his writing is ,so is he,is right .
将错误的地方帮我改正,
嗯,介个.错的地方还蛮多的耶.
嗯,还有你是准备给外国人看的还是给中国人看的,写的方法是不一样的.还有,你多大了?这是神马程度的作文?小学?初中?高中?还是大学的?我先改改语法,如果你想我帮你再改用词或者内容神马的,找我.
还有,我猜想你想说的是书写,而不是写作吧.那就不是writing,是handwriting.
nowadays,handwriting is very important.As a student,we always need handwriting.However,someone's is good,while others are just ordinary.
Some adults always say,handwriting tells a man.When you are reading,you can know the author is tall or short,fat or thin,or even bad temper or good temper,etc.Although I do not think what the adults said is totally right,some of their arguments are reasonable.Because I always have this feeling,if someone's writing is neat,the person,in fact,is very scrupulous and his temper is good.However,if he writes carelessly,(绝对不是casually),I may think he is lazy.(后面那句不要了,没意义.) But,(后面加上你觉得大人们说得不全对的原因.)
Therefore,(最后一句和前面的论点矛盾了,我先给你改语法,内容你需要我就给你改.) if you always pay attention to other's handwriting,you can know what the person is like.In other words,handwriting tells a man.
我不知道你学了英语多久,语法和内容都很有问题唉,多看看范文吧孩子~
有问题找我.
再问： 这位仁兄，我是大一的，题目是 《字如其人》老师给我打四分，有点打击自信心，所以想请高手帮忙……就这篇文章我还希望你能多给点建议……也希望在我的写作中多给点建议……
再答： 好吧，如果你是大一的，在用词上肯定就有点苦逼了~~而且内容也太简单了，建议背背单词，以你的情况，背背四级单词就好了，在写作的时候也能用上。我重新看了一遍我给你改过的，有些地方给你说说。 从内容主题来说： 首先，你的论点是什么？手写很重要？还是有人写得好有人写得不好？ 其次，论据是社么？是不是字如其人？可以分两方面来谈：一，正面——字如其人，要认真练字。因为字能看出一个人的性格。字是敲门砖。还是有很多情况能用到手写字（签名什么的）。二，反面——字不如其人。其一，字没有文风重要，看出人的性格不是看字，而是看他写的内容。其二，信息技术发达，手写不常用。 最后，重复主题，paraphrase，当然不能写一模一样的一句话，与主题内容相同，但表达方式不同。得出结论，你认为是字如其人还是字不如其人，以及简单解释为什么。 从用词和语法来说： nowadays,（nowadays绝逼不是一个好的词汇，已经用得有点烂了，用today或者now都比这个好。） handwriting is very important(可以用别的词替代，如significant，vital，essential等。). As a student, we always need handwriting. However, someone's is good, while others are just ordinary. （你这个thesis statement虽然很明确，但看起来太简单了，有点像小学生作文。改改句式比较好. Now, with the increasing development of technology, people doubt whether handwriting is significant or not. In China, there is a saying, Handwriting tells a man. Some agree with it while others are not.） 后面的内容可以参考上面我写的那些，也可以自己想更多的理由。还有know这个词，在写作中就别用了，可以用realize; be aware of; get wise to。 最后结尾段，我说得paraphrase，就是把“Handwriting tells a man. Some agree with it while others are not.” 改写。你可以改改。然后So这个词在表述结论的时候也别在写作中用（你要表示“所以”的话要换的是别的词，不是下面这些。therefore和thus是可以的。），可以用therefore, thus, to conclude, in conclusion, to summarize, to sum up等来引出结尾段。 差不多就这样了。多写吧，写了经常找老师改改。大学生写作文酱紫是不行的唷·~~ps. 我不是仁兄，我是仁姐。
再问： 姐，我还想问一下你……英语作文电子排版时要注意哪些?看到你感觉看到了以为亲切的姐姐，嘿嘿……非常谢谢你的耐心回答……
再答： 电子排版？你是说用Microsoft word还是什么？ 如果是的话，一般是没什么太重要的规定的，但是如果比较学术一点来说，字体：Times New Roman Size: 12pt...然后有些老师会要求要2倍或者1.5倍行距。格式的话看你喜欢，喜欢用顶头的就顶，但是每段之间要空一行。如下： nowadays, handwriting is very important. As a student, we always need handwriting. However, someone's is good, while others are just ordinary. Some adults always say, handwriting tells a man. When you are reading, you can know the author is tall or short, fat or thin, or even bad temper or good temper, etc. Although I do not think what the adults said is totally right, some of their arguments are reasonable. Because I always have this feeling, if someone's writing is neat, the person, in fact, is very scrupulous and his temper is good. However, if he writes carelessly, I may think he is lazy. Therefore, if you always pay attention to other's handwriting, you can know what the person is like. In other words, handwriting tells a man. 如果喜欢不顶头的，每段之间就不用空一行。如下： nowadays, handwriting is very important. As a student, we always need handwriting. However, someone's is good, while others are just ordinary. Some adults always say, handwriting tells a man. When you are reading, you can know the author is tall or short, fat or thin, or even bad temper or good temper, etc. Although I do not think what the adults said is totally right, some of their arguments are reasonable. Because I always have this feeling, if someone's writing is neat, the person, in fact, is very scrupulous and his temper is good. However, if he writes carelessly, I may think he is lazy. Therefore, if you always pay attention to other's handwriting, you can know what the person is like. In other words, handwriting tells a man.
嗯,还有你是准备给外国人看的还是给中国人看的,写的方法是不一样的.还有,你多大了?这是神马程度的作文?小学?初中?高中?还是大学的?我先改改语法,如果你想我帮你再改用词或者内容神马的,找我.
还有,我猜想你想说的是书写,而不是写作吧.那就不是writing,是handwriting.
nowadays,handwriting is very important.As a student,we always need handwriting.However,someone's is good,while others are just ordinary.
Some adults always say,handwriting tells a man.When you are reading,you can know the author is tall or short,fat or thin,or even bad temper or good temper,etc.Although I do not think what the adults said is totally right,some of their arguments are reasonable.Because I always have this feeling,if someone's writing is neat,the person,in fact,is very scrupulous and his temper is good.However,if he writes carelessly,(绝对不是casually),I may think he is lazy.(后面那句不要了,没意义.) But,(后面加上你觉得大人们说得不全对的原因.)
Therefore,(最后一句和前面的论点矛盾了,我先给你改语法,内容你需要我就给你改.) if you always pay attention to other's handwriting,you can know what the person is like.In other words,handwriting tells a man.
我不知道你学了英语多久,语法和内容都很有问题唉,多看看范文吧孩子~
有问题找我.
再问： 这位仁兄，我是大一的，题目是 《字如其人》老师给我打四分，有点打击自信心，所以想请高手帮忙……就这篇文章我还希望你能多给点建议……也希望在我的写作中多给点建议……
再答： 好吧，如果你是大一的，在用词上肯定就有点苦逼了~~而且内容也太简单了，建议背背单词，以你的情况，背背四级单词就好了，在写作的时候也能用上。我重新看了一遍我给你改过的，有些地方给你说说。 从内容主题来说： 首先，你的论点是什么？手写很重要？还是有人写得好有人写得不好？ 其次，论据是社么？是不是字如其人？可以分两方面来谈：一，正面——字如其人，要认真练字。因为字能看出一个人的性格。字是敲门砖。还是有很多情况能用到手写字（签名什么的）。二，反面——字不如其人。其一，字没有文风重要，看出人的性格不是看字，而是看他写的内容。其二，信息技术发达，手写不常用。 最后，重复主题，paraphrase，当然不能写一模一样的一句话，与主题内容相同，但表达方式不同。得出结论，你认为是字如其人还是字不如其人，以及简单解释为什么。 从用词和语法来说： nowadays,（nowadays绝逼不是一个好的词汇，已经用得有点烂了，用today或者now都比这个好。） handwriting is very important(可以用别的词替代，如significant，vital，essential等。). As a student, we always need handwriting. However, someone's is good, while others are just ordinary. （你这个thesis statement虽然很明确，但看起来太简单了，有点像小学生作文。改改句式比较好. Now, with the increasing development of technology, people doubt whether handwriting is significant or not. In China, there is a saying, Handwriting tells a man. Some agree with it while others are not.） 后面的内容可以参考上面我写的那些，也可以自己想更多的理由。还有know这个词，在写作中就别用了，可以用realize; be aware of; get wise to。 最后结尾段，我说得paraphrase，就是把“Handwriting tells a man. Some agree with it while others are not.” 改写。你可以改改。然后So这个词在表述结论的时候也别在写作中用（你要表示“所以”的话要换的是别的词，不是下面这些。therefore和thus是可以的。），可以用therefore, thus, to conclude, in conclusion, to summarize, to sum up等来引出结尾段。 差不多就这样了。多写吧，写了经常找老师改改。大学生写作文酱紫是不行的唷·~~ps. 我不是仁兄，我是仁姐。
再问： 姐，我还想问一下你……英语作文电子排版时要注意哪些?看到你感觉看到了以为亲切的姐姐，嘿嘿……非常谢谢你的耐心回答……
再答： 电子排版？你是说用Microsoft word还是什么？ 如果是的话，一般是没什么太重要的规定的，但是如果比较学术一点来说，字体：Times New Roman Size: 12pt...然后有些老师会要求要2倍或者1.5倍行距。格式的话看你喜欢，喜欢用顶头的就顶，但是每段之间要空一行。如下： nowadays, handwriting is very important. As a student, we always need handwriting. However, someone's is good, while others are just ordinary. Some adults always say, handwriting tells a man. When you are reading, you can know the author is tall or short, fat or thin, or even bad temper or good temper, etc. Although I do not think what the adults said is totally right, some of their arguments are reasonable. Because I always have this feeling, if someone's writing is neat, the person, in fact, is very scrupulous and his temper is good. However, if he writes carelessly, I may think he is lazy. Therefore, if you always pay attention to other's handwriting, you can know what the person is like. In other words, handwriting tells a man. 如果喜欢不顶头的，每段之间就不用空一行。如下： nowadays, handwriting is very important. As a student, we always need handwriting. However, someone's is good, while others are just ordinary. Some adults always say, handwriting tells a man. When you are reading, you can know the author is tall or short, fat or thin, or even bad temper or good temper, etc. Although I do not think what the adults said is totally right, some of their arguments are reasonable. Because I always have this feeling, if someone's writing is neat, the person, in fact, is very scrupulous and his temper is good. However, if he writes carelessly, I may think he is lazy. Therefore, if you always pay attention to other's handwriting, you can know what the person is like. In other words, handwriting tells a man.