修正我英语日记中的错误

修正我英语日记中的错误
Today ,i'm plan to do homework everyday ,my brother will check me .
At first .thanks for brother's support .i will do my best write more beautiful .hoho
In fact ,my mood is heavy,i feel terrible about i meet in this morning ,severl days ago,i had provied a important file to a customer,i have recevied a letter form Our sales in today.she said :"our mouse sales to the customer is wired mouse,why contain dongle ,please explain it ASAP",according to check ,i was Discovered i got the other fellow's file to coustomer .oh ,my dear ,i made a mistake.
At once .i improved it ,exchange the file,and explain to customer and beg his (谅解)understand .and then ,my Supervisor ask me how to prevent it ,a series Things are coming ,everything i do is for a mistake .my careless let me failure.：(
From now on ,i understand completely ,i must do everything check again and again until 100% right ,i hope my supervisor to give me more encourage,Because everybody could make mistake ,me too .
It's all over ,i don't want talk about it any more .
OK ,today i am write it down to remind me and everyone.
罗博士，Emilyskywalker,我爱澳门，ninagaiwa,
我会一直铭记在心，之所以把我那篇自己写的错误百出的作文发到百度上，是相信百度是一个温暖的集体，大家都非常的热心
为了我这个糟糕的英语学习者，担误了大家宝贵的休息或工作时间，在此再次表示感谢
我热爱英语，但一直讨厌语法，对语法有逃僻心理，这是我一直为什么学不好英语的首要原因，其次我的口语也不好，很多单词发音也不准，
但我不灰心，不气馁，我相信"真诚所致，金石为开"的精神
我希望我努力学到你们的水平，然后去帮助更多需要帮忙和爱好英语的朋友。：)

1,I'm plan to---去掉'm,因为 plan 是动词,一般现在时态时不能再加be动词.
2,me--改成my homework.
3,thanks for brother's support--supporting
4,do my best write --do my best to write
5,mood is heavy ,搭配不当.可以说I'm in blue today,表示心情不佳.
6,about 后加what
7,severl --several 拼写
8,provied--provided 拼写
9,understand--understanding
10,let me failure--let me fail .let sb.do sth .最好用 my carelessness led to the failure.carelessness是名词形式,led to 是 lead to 的过去式,导致的意思.
11,I hope that my supervisor will give me more encouragement.
hope 这个词不好用hope sb.to do 这种句式 ,encourage变名词.
12,want talk --want to talk
13,am--去掉am
相信你将你的日记公布出来并让人改正,必是一个勇敢坦诚之人,但英语上如若要进一步提高,语法上还是要花一些时间,虽然现在强调交流意思表达思想最重要,但正确语法还是需要的.可以买一本语法的书,