我打开柜门,站在柜门前一下惊呆了.一具骷髅悬挂在眼前,由于柜门突然打开,它也随之轻微摇晃起来,让我觉得它好像马上要跳出柜

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我打开柜门,站在柜门前一下惊呆了.一具骷髅悬挂在眼前,由于柜门突然打开,它也随之轻微摇晃起来,让我觉得它好像马上要跳出柜门朝我扑过来似的.
I was astonished when I opened the cupboard.A skeleton was hanging in front of my eyes.Because the cupboard door opened abruptly,so the skeleton was shook slightly,which made me to consider it would immediately jump out from the cupboard and rush to me.
1、请就这句话分析,这句英语有语法错吗?请别另外翻译
2、地道程度如何,

I was astonished when I opened the cupboard.A skeleton was hanging in front of my eyes.As the cupboard door opened abruptly,the skeleton was shaking slightly,which seems to immediately jump out from the cupboard and rush to me.
如上,小改了一下,首先是because和so关联词的重复使用；其次shake没有被动态,用过去进行时会更加有画面感；然后是make me consider这种chinglish的出现.大致个人感觉还是翻得不错的,

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