作业帮请高手修改一下我的英语作文
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请高手修改一下我的英语作文
To commemorate my new life start
I am so tired that i just wanna a break in my home when i go home every night.However,the other people will not wait for me,they are always improving just like they are far from getting tired.I don't have any own time to do what i like,i fall asleep with a achy body all the time.And i always think of my previous teachers and friends,though i don't want to them appear in my mind,they just do it like losing control.Yes i don't like the life like this because it exhausted me a lot.But i also think that it's OK beacuse i enjoy a full life and i usually have something to do.In my following senior high school days,i will be more busy than now,but i am afraid that my will'll collapse to ground .I remember that my grandma has said to me that these three years just like uphill,i have only one chooice——climbing and climbing.When i arrive at the top,the break will start.Everytime i thought of her sincere words and earnest wishes,i am moved and i raise my head to brace up.Although in daily life she is partial to her grandson,i want to redound on her love as well.Everything is new,maybe i'm a little diffrent from the others,but i will get myself involved in my new class,too.My burnout is for the time being,i will gradually used to it with my method,right?I will not be so worrying,right?
That's all.
To commemorate my new life start
I am so tired that i just wanna a break in my home when i go home every night.However,the other people will not wait for me,they are always improving just like they are far from getting tired.I don't have any own time to do what i like,i fall asleep with a achy body all the time.And i always think of my previous teachers and friends,though i don't want to them appear in my mind,they just do it like losing control.Yes i don't like the life like this because it exhausted me a lot.But i also think that it's OK beacuse i enjoy a full life and i usually have something to do.In my following senior high school days,i will be more busy than now,but i am afraid that my will'll collapse to ground .I remember that my grandma has said to me that these three years just like uphill,i have only one chooice——climbing and climbing.When i arrive at the top,the break will start.Everytime i thought of her sincere words and earnest wishes,i am moved and i raise my head to brace up.Although in daily life she is partial to her grandson,i want to redound on her love as well.Everything is new,maybe i'm a little diffrent from the others,but i will get myself involved in my new class,too.My burnout is for the time being,i will gradually used to it with my method,right?I will not be so worrying,right?
That's all.
To commemorate the start of my new life
I am so tired that i just want to get a break in my home when i go home every night. On the other hand, the other people will not wait for me,they are always busy just like they are far from getting tired.I don't have any own time to do what i like,i fall asleep with a aching body all the time.And i always think of my former teachers and friends, though i don't want them to appear in my mind, they just appear like I am losing control.Yes, i don't like the life like this because it exhausted me a lot. However, i also think that it's okay beacuse i enjoy a full life and i usually have something to do. In my following senior high school days, i will be more busy than now but i am afraid that my determination will collapse to the ground one day .I remember that my grandma has said to me that the next three years, my life would be a uphill task, i have only one choice——that is face it and climb it. When i arrive at the top, the break I want will start.Everytime i thought of her sincere words and earnest wishes,i am moved and i my head will raise and brace the the future with confidence. In daily life she her love to me is partial, I therefore as a grandson, i would want to redound her love. .Everyday is new, maybe i'm a little diffrent from the others, but i will get myself involved in my new class. My burnout feeling is temporary, i will gradually used to it with my determination, I am confident and will overcome the burnout and back to my usual self.
I am so tired that i just want to get a break in my home when i go home every night. On the other hand, the other people will not wait for me,they are always busy just like they are far from getting tired.I don't have any own time to do what i like,i fall asleep with a aching body all the time.And i always think of my former teachers and friends, though i don't want them to appear in my mind, they just appear like I am losing control.Yes, i don't like the life like this because it exhausted me a lot. However, i also think that it's okay beacuse i enjoy a full life and i usually have something to do. In my following senior high school days, i will be more busy than now but i am afraid that my determination will collapse to the ground one day .I remember that my grandma has said to me that the next three years, my life would be a uphill task, i have only one choice——that is face it and climb it. When i arrive at the top, the break I want will start.Everytime i thought of her sincere words and earnest wishes,i am moved and i my head will raise and brace the the future with confidence. In daily life she her love to me is partial, I therefore as a grandson, i would want to redound her love. .Everyday is new, maybe i'm a little diffrent from the others, but i will get myself involved in my new class. My burnout feeling is temporary, i will gradually used to it with my determination, I am confident and will overcome the burnout and back to my usual self.