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自己l写的高一英文自我介绍 有何错误?

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自己l写的高一英文自我介绍 有何错误?
Hello,everyone.I'm so glad to intorduce myself.And I'm happy I can be a member of -------high school.My hobby is drawing pictures.I like reading books best,I think books can make me happy and give me plenty of knowledge.
I like Enlish ,too.I find that English which I studied in the high school is very different from English which I studied before.I think English that taught in the high school is more difficult,so we must be more careful and we should try our best to learn English.
I hope I can stay in this class very happily and I can study well.
That's all.Thank you.
".I like reading books best"这句以鄙人浅薄的知识认为不要“best”,以及第二段第一句的"too"不要,还有下面的从句“I find that English which I studied in the high school is very different from English which I studied before.“里面的that可以去掉吧,不知道你的“that”是做什么理解的,并且这一句前面最好加“but”转折,
“I think English that taught in the high school is more difficult”里面的taught前加was

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