帮我看看这自我介绍自己写了一篇自我介绍,英语水平不好,看看哪里有错误帮我改一下,把错误的列出来就得了,不要重新发一篇给我

帮我看看这自我介绍
自己写了一篇自我介绍,英语水平不好,看看哪里有错误帮我改一下,把错误的列出来就得了,不要重新发一篇给我
Hello!My name is Ma Hai Kun.I was born at 1990,July.I am nineteen years old.
There are four people in my family,my mother、my father、my little sister and me.I love them,because without they help,there are nothing I have.My mother always tell me money is not everthing.But I also think we can’t live without money.But sometimes I don’t understand why the money so important,just a paper.
We live in NanNing.People call it "Green City",but I feel very hot in NanNing.I don’t like it.When the weather is cold I still bath with cold water.Scientist said it is good for body.I just don’t want to burn the water.
My interest is read book,play network game,moive and music.I don't like sport but sometimes I also play basketball with my friend.My favorite snack is cookies and cake,it’s delicious.I like the kind of book is about space science.Space is mysterious and beautiful.If there really have perfect thing in the world,I think that is space.I often attend news.I think we must know more thing in the community,it’s good for us.I always think why people can not know each other.If we can that the world will more beautiful.But the reality always can’t come true we wish.
My dream is tour around the world.I can see a lot of beautiful landscapes,meet many different people,various things and feel different spirit.And then I can make many friend,it’s good for my job and my life.Maybe I will find my love.What a good dream.But I know I must work hard now,if my dream never comes.
I like make friend.Do you know what true friend is?True friend will find your mistake and admonish you mend it.If we are friend,we can study together,play tgether and talk together.
Well that is about me.I hope you will love me.
摆脱，摆出来是想让你们帮我改正，不是说一句很多错就走了

年月用in,in 1990.
I love them because without their help,I have nothing.
why money is so important,it is just a paper.
to boil water.
My interests are reading books,playing network game,watching movies and listening to the music.多于一个兴趣.
play basketball with my friends.篮球是一队人吧.
My favourite snack are...there are delicious.多于一个
The kind of book I like most is about cosmology宇宙学/astrology占星学/astronomy天文学.
The space...the space
attend to
more things
cannot
will be more beautiful / peaceful.
don't come true as we wish.
to tour around the world...spirits.
I can have many friends.
otherwise my dream never comes true.
I like to make friends.and admonish you to correct it.
if we are friends,...