作业帮我的英语作文有没有什么错误
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我的英语作文有没有什么错误
I love cycling
My favourite hobby is riding a bike
When I was a child,my father taught me to ride a bicycle.I always tried to master the balance,but always failed.Before I finally learned to ride a bike,I first fell down many times.I didn't give up and I tried again and again,Finally I learned,I felt very happy.
Now,dad and I often ride a bike together,I always ride in front of him.I realy feel very happy.l love cycling very much.
I love cycling
My favourite hobby is riding a bike
When I was a child,my father taught me to ride a bicycle.I always tried to master the balance,but always failed.Before I finally learned to ride a bike,I first fell down many times.I didn't give up and I tried again and again,Finally I learned,I felt very happy.
Now,dad and I often ride a bike together,I always ride in front of him.I realy feel very happy.l love cycling very much.
master the balance换成keep balance
learned to ride a bike改成was able to ride a bike
去掉first
dad and I often ride bikes(如果是双人自行车请忽略)
really写错了
learned to ride a bike改成was able to ride a bike
去掉first
dad and I often ride bikes(如果是双人自行车请忽略)
really写错了