作业帮请你帮我看看我的英语文法对不对
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请你帮我看看我的英语文法对不对
In my opinion,students should not have to wear uniforms.For one thing,some uniforms are not good-looking.Some students may don’t like go to school because of they don’t like their uniforms.I believe that different students also have different style.Another reason student should not wear uniform is that some uniforms are uncomfortable,or some may don’t suit students to have lessons.For example,some students wear a skirt to do exercise,or they wear a shirt with long sleeves in summer,it is very uncomfortable.Finally,uniforms are too expensive in fact.A suit of uniforms is about two hundred dollars.Some students don’t afford it.May be because that they can’t not go to school.
In my opinion,students should not have to wear uniforms.For one thing,some uniforms are not good-looking.Some students may don’t like go to school because of they don’t like their uniforms.I believe that different students also have different style.Another reason student should not wear uniform is that some uniforms are uncomfortable,or some may don’t suit students to have lessons.For example,some students wear a skirt to do exercise,or they wear a shirt with long sleeves in summer,it is very uncomfortable.Finally,uniforms are too expensive in fact.A suit of uniforms is about two hundred dollars.Some students don’t afford it.May be because that they can’t not go to school.
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students should not have to wear uniforms错 should应该跟原型 这样表达就可以了：students do not have to wear uniforms学生们没有必要穿校服
Some students may don’t like go to school because of they don’t like their uniforms.错 because of 应该加名次或名词短语 不应该加句子 把of去掉就可以了
Another reason student should not wear uniform is that some uniforms are uncomfortable or some may don’t suit students to have lessons 改成 Another reason of student don't have to wear uniform is that some uniforms are uncomfortable or some may not suit for students to have lessons
or they wear a shirt with long sleeves in summer,it is very uncomfortable.
改成 It is very uncomfortable for students to wear shirts with long sleeves in summe
students should not have to wear uniforms错 should应该跟原型 这样表达就可以了：students do not have to wear uniforms学生们没有必要穿校服
Some students may don’t like go to school because of they don’t like their uniforms.错 because of 应该加名次或名词短语 不应该加句子 把of去掉就可以了
Another reason student should not wear uniform is that some uniforms are uncomfortable or some may don’t suit students to have lessons 改成 Another reason of student don't have to wear uniform is that some uniforms are uncomfortable or some may not suit for students to have lessons
or they wear a shirt with long sleeves in summer,it is very uncomfortable.
改成 It is very uncomfortable for students to wear shirts with long sleeves in summe